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Sunset

SUNSET When sun goes over hill at end of day And draws its purple veil across the sky; When curlews settle down from work and play And no more through the twisted branches fly; The woodsman takes his axe and homeward treads. Hot meat and tea will end his daily work. His children now are safe and tucked in beds, Wrapped ‘gainst the ghosts and goblin-ghouls that lurk. Now turns the cat to hunting or to fight: Brown owl hoots joyful as he swoops down slow; Their eyes are wondrous clear all through the night The mice are terrified and hide down low. Two lovers meet and fingers touch in joy: The sunset is the time for girl and boy. ................................................ For Sara Kendrick's Contest "Sonnet Me"

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Date: 6/1/2011 10:10:00 AM
This one has 10 too so would be Shakespearian yes? very nice! Light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2011 4:25:00 PM
sweet and delicately done , syd... way to go with my happy cheers for the big win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/13/2011 2:21:00 PM
I was really taken with the nostalgia of part 1, then I wanted different end rhymes in the next for lines and a bit juicier wrap up? Does that make any sense? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2011 11:21:00 AM
Good to see you in the top ten Sidney. Congratulations on your worthy poem in eight place honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/13/2011 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Sara, Sydney
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Date: 4/13/2011 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Syd in the contest "Sonnet Me" sponsored by Sara Kendrick. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:08:00 AM
Congrats Sydney on your super win in the contest Sonnet me .Love, Gautami
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:46:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your big win in Sonnet Me contest .. enjoy luv..
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Date: 4/12/2011 6:02:00 PM
Ahhhh. such a vivid picture you paint and such beautiful emotions you stir with this wonderful sonnet, Sydney. Lainie
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:27:00 PM
I truly enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for entering it in my contest..Sara
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:04:00 PM
This is the smoothest reading sonnet in this contest. Very nice. Congratulations Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/8/2011 12:34:00 PM
Very nice the way you set up your theme with the woodsman coming home at dusk and putting the children to bed. I've heard many a hooting owl and fighting cats at night, Syd, but it truly is a time for lovers to meet. Very nice sonnet for Sara's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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