Sunset

SUNSET


When sun goes over hill at end of day
And draws its purple veil across the sky;
When curlews settle down from work and play
And no more through the twisted branches fly;
The woodsman takes his axe and homeward treads.
Hot meat and tea will end his daily work.
His children now are safe and tucked in beds,
Wrapped ‘gainst the ghosts  and goblin-ghouls that lurk.

Now turns the cat to hunting or to fight:
Brown owl hoots joyful as he swoops down slow;
Their  eyes are wondrous clear all through the night
The mice are terrified and hide down  low.
Two lovers meet and fingers touch in joy:
The sunset is the time for girl and boy.

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For Sara Kendrick's  Contest 	"Sonnet Me"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 10:10 AM
This one has 10 too so would be Shakespearian yes? very nice! Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 4:25 PM
sweet and delicately done , syd... way to go with my happy cheers for the big win! :) huggs, nette
Guzzi Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 2:21 PM
I was really taken with the nostalgia of part 1, then I wanted different end rhymes in the next for lines and a bit juicier wrap up? Does that make any sense? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 11:21 AM
Good to see you in the top ten Sidney. Congratulations on your worthy poem in eight place honor. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Sara, Sydney
Brown Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 4:56 AM
Congratulations for your win Syd in the contest "Sonnet Me" sponsored by Sara Kendrick. Love, Carol
Phookan Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 3:08 AM
Congrats Sydney on your super win in the contest Sonnet me .Love, Gautami
Sweetheart Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 8:46 PM
Congrats Syd on your big win in Sonnet Me contest .. enjoy luv..
George   Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 6:02 PM
Ahhhh. such a vivid picture you paint and such beautiful emotions you stir with this wonderful sonnet, Sydney. Lainie
Kendrick Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 4:27 PM
I truly enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for entering it in my contest..Sara
Johnson Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 4:04 PM
This is the smoothest reading sonnet in this contest. Very nice. Congratulations Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Very nice the way you set up your theme with the woodsman coming home at dusk and putting the children to bed. I've heard many a hooting owl and fighting cats at night, Syd, but it truly is a time for lovers to meet. Very nice sonnet for Sara's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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