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Sunset

I've taken to cuddling up with the children In the garden hammock at twilight To watch the bats come out It's a great way to get them to chat We appear as the sun's setting Make ourselves comfortable Typically they need to trump As soon as I'm unable to escape We watched the sunset reflected last night So it was framed in the kitchen window We noted several spiders in webs In the shrubs watching too, peacefully The sunset is a backdrop to the clouds It looks like the beginning of a painting Waiting for the scene to be filled in As we wait for orange to turn blue/grey It feels quick and we play daft games Recently it's 'what is this name short for' Question: "is Bob short for Bobbert?" Me: "erm no" cue laughter and a trump The other night the sunset sat in the background To a conversation about Kathy I said "the Kathy we know" She thought that was the full name* *we cried laughing for 20 minutes, the spiders in webs probably furious at the interruption. Us, unawares, being painted into that days sunset (My friend is called Aikaterini)

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Date: 9/26/2023 6:28:00 PM
I've been quaintly requesting poetry on family members, as you have done, exquisite DD. Ranks higher than that win I'm congratulating you on! Sigh
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Date: 9/26/2023 8:22:00 PM
Thanks Anaya - a captured moment can be beautiful x
Date: 9/9/2023 10:32:00 PM
Unique and endearing D. The vision of you with the girls at the end of the day is exquisite. Even more lovely that the sunset described, is the thought of the three of you enjoying it. Your poetry is maturing D into realms we haven't seen before. What is it? Are you getting old or something? LOL just kidding ,, forgive me. BOL for the contest my friend . You have created something lovely. Your mate.. SV
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Date: 9/9/2023 11:13:00 PM
Thanks SV, I just thought there's already a lot of sunset poems and these are my recent sunset experiences so may as well build in. Just fortuitous as it's this week we've been out in the garden catching the sunset x thank you for your kind words
Date: 9/9/2023 4:53:00 AM
A very heartwarming ambience youve described here so beautifully. I loved reading this. So stunning
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Date: 9/9/2023 5:11:00 AM
Thank you, just attempting a different angle for a sunset contest. I appreciate your kind words x

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