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Stop in your tracks

Take a deep breath
Stop and relax

Close your eyes
Exhale a slow deep breath

In your mind’s eye 
It’s early dawn
It’s quiet and serene around you

Look far out at the horizon
There over the peaceful rolling sea
See a fine line of light in the distance

The sun is about to rise
There’s just a fine line
Of warm brilliant orange
Where the water and sky meet
 
It’s beautiful tranquil blissful
Let it all soak in

Inhale slowly
Exhale

The sun is about to rise
And you’ve got a front row seat
Nothing could be more important

You’re holding a remote
And you get to press
The PAUSE button
You’re in control

The show is on hold for you
The sun won’t rise 
Until you’re ready

Breathe in the panoramic view
Nothing could be more 
Important than to be
Right here right now

Put the remote in your pocket
Take a deep breath
Keep looking at the horizon

Inhale
Exhale

See that fine line of orange glowing
And know that you have it on pause
It’s not going anywhere

Take a deep breath
You need to do only
One thing right now

You need to take the time
To unclutter your mind

Much like pulling weeds from a garden
Look at your troubles your worries head on
Call them out
Disown them
Reject them
 
Grab them by the throat
Pull them out by the roots

Gather every one in a bundle
Take your time
Turn them in one at a time

See how uprooted
They are powerless

Every last one of them
Bundle them all 
Into that wooden chest in front of you

Take your time
Take all the time you need
When you’re done
Close the lid
And lock the box

Catch your breath
See how the horizon
Still has its bright orange line
And you still have the remote on pause

Take a deep breath
Feel the freedom
With each breath you inhale
Slowly exhale

Throw the key away
As far as you can throw

Inhale
Exhale
Time is on your side
Relax

You’re holding the remote
You’re in control
The sun won’t rise till you’re ready
Breathe it all in

Right now it’s just you
and your sealed wooden chest
 
It’s heavy but you can do it
Go ahead and push it off the cliff

One more push should do it
There it goes off the cliff

Watch it tumble down down
Your troubles and worries
Out of reach

As the box hits the sea 
Listen to the distant splash
And watch the box sink
And hit the bottom of the sea

Exhale a deep genuine sigh of relief
Inhale your first emancipated breath

Taste the moment
Enjoy the unfettered feeling

Inhale
Fill your lungs with the freedom
You remember as a child

Running through a field of flowers
With the wind through your hair
And laughter echoing from all directions

Soak in the moment
And only when you’re ready
Take the remote in your hand

Feel the power the control
Feel the anticipation of the new day

Only when you’re ready
Press the slow motion button
Let the show pick up 
From where you left off

Connect with that thin
Orange strip at the horizon

Be one with it
Feel it slowly widen

Control the speed of the day rising
Let the orange ball of fire slowly emerge

You are in control 
One with the universal energy
And nobody can shake your strength

You are light and carefree
In the depths of your heart
Infused with energy

Let the day begin…



Published in my photo/poetry book ~SUNRISE MEDITATION~ 2019

Read on air by invitation  ~  December 5, 2021  'POETS' HARBOUR'

AP: 2nd place 2022, 2nd place 2020, Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2023

Submitted on October 8, 2020 for contest IMPRESS ME WITH AN OLD POEM (002) sponsored by POET DESTROYER A  -  RANKED 6TH

on June 11, 2020 for contest YOUR BEST POEM sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE  -  RANKED 3RD

on April 10, 2019 for contest 2019 POEM OF THE DAY sponsored by RICHARD LAMOUREUX  -  RANKED 2ND

and on February 16, 2019 for contest 2019 POETRY MARATHON MILE 19 sponsored by MARK TONEY

POTD February 14, 2019 - Very honored this poem was selected as POTD as this is my first ever in this style and writing this poem felt somewhat like a personal journeying.

Originally posted on February 13, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/14/2021 11:36:00 AM
How serene and soothing Line! I truly felt calm while listening to it! Great work! I'm a nature lover and enjoy taking time to enjoy the sunsets that I see from my terrace! Very meditative experience.
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Date: 6/14/2021 11:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, Smita ~
Date: 6/1/2021 8:58:00 PM
Line, wow, wonderful, and you have the voice for meditation, love, love, love this poem and your voice recording, love -Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 5:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Constance. Most appreciated ~
Date: 4/16/2021 5:07:00 AM
I enjoy your poetic recipes for a happy and harmonious life. Your insights are much appreciated.
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Date: 4/16/2021 6:46:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Peter.
Date: 10/16/2020 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Line, love your imagery in this scene. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/16/2020 2:51:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated ~
Date: 6/13/2020 5:57:00 PM
You say this is is your first in this style but your pen has carved such a beautiful composition that it feels as if you have been keeping it inside to be poured out gorgeously. Congratulations on your win Line :)
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Date: 6/14/2020 12:42:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/13/2020 6:06:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 6/13/2020 1:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, Beata.
Date: 6/12/2020 6:18:00 PM
Loved your meditation exploration, Line. I shall have to come back to this when the anxieties stack up. Some great advice here. If only life had a pause button! But it's nice to imagine that, with such peaceful surroundings. Congrats on your POTD and podium win with this gem ~ John
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Date: 6/13/2020 1:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, John.
Date: 6/12/2020 6:02:00 PM
Lovely to read this one again line. I can see why it's your favourite, congrats on another win with this poetic gem. Tom
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Date: 6/12/2020 6:14:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/12/2020 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Line...let the day begin with this beautiful image.
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Date: 6/12/2020 6:14:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jeanne.
Date: 6/12/2020 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I just had to write you again. This is a masterpiece with a great picture. I love it. I wish I was sitting there. Enjoy your win and day...........
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Date: 6/12/2020 3:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/21/2020 8:58:00 PM
I just found this (I see it's been almost a year) and truly enjoyed reading. It had the effect of an actual experience. Masterful.
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Date: 1/21/2020 10:23:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Eric.
Date: 1/7/2020 7:13:00 AM
Very good poetic expression. Loved the flow. God bless you.
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Date: 1/7/2020 6:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pratap. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/16/2019 9:04:00 PM
Just wow! A masterpiece, my friend.
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Date: 12/17/2019 12:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for unearthing this long poem, Franci. So glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/7/2019 11:47:00 PM
My reading of your poem, chose this first of all, found it Yogic and Charismatic. Its AWESOME! Thank You
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Date: 10/8/2019 12:24:00 AM
Thank you for your much visit and compliment, Joshua.
Date: 9/24/2019 3:59:00 PM
Your picture and writing were out of this world. I wish I could do what you wrote. "Throw the key away As far as you can throw Inhale Exhale Time is on your side Relax" How can I walk into your picture above?????
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Date: 9/24/2019 4:12:00 PM
LOL thank you for your lovely visit, Paula.
Date: 8/20/2019 9:00:00 PM
This was art on paper, or in this case my screen. mastery... Ann
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Date: 8/20/2019 10:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ann. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/27/2019 10:35:00 PM
Gee, never saw this great one before! Fantastic Line. panagiota
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Date: 5/27/2019 10:44:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and compliment, Panagiota.
Date: 4/27/2019 6:20:00 PM
Line, a belated congrats for your POTD honor and previous placements for your lovely, inspirational and uplifting poem, as well as for your podium placement in Richard's contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/27/2019 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 4/25/2019 9:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win, thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 4/25/2019 12:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for my most appreciated ranking, Richard.
Date: 3/6/2019 5:19:00 PM
Hello Lin, okay this poem went through for my fav. I am pleased.I will read this poem often. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 3/6/2019 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene.
Date: 3/6/2019 5:09:00 PM
Hello Lin, you know I do meditate I have done it a long time, I like this poem and will try to make it my fav. I will let you know if it goes through.Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 3/6/2019 5:36:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely compliment, Darlene. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/25/2019 7:43:00 AM
Huge congratulations on this inspiring piece being awarded POTD my dear friend. Very inspirational poetry! A fav...
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Date: 2/25/2019 8:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robert, for the lovely compliment.
Date: 2/15/2019 9:09:00 PM
This is an amazing verse, Line. I was swept up into the imagery and your beautiful words. Congrats for this being chosen as POTD.
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Date: 2/15/2019 10:35:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and compliment, Sandra.
Date: 2/14/2019 8:06:00 PM
By the end of the journey this lovely poem took me on I did feel more relaxed with easy deep breathing. A sweet and lovely gift on this Valentine's Day. I hope yours is a very happy one! Congratulations on your POTD Line! : )
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Date: 2/14/2019 8:41:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Connie. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/14/2019 7:32:00 PM
You paint such vivid images with your words!!! Oh my!! I feel like I am watching this beautiful sunrise. My mind at ease. Moments are quiet and tender. I am there. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/14/2019 8:41:00 PM
Thanks for taking the trip with me, Brandy. Most appreciated.
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