Premiere Contest WinnerSunrise Glow of Tulips

Don’t try to straighten tulips, dear - they spread.
They lean and bend…they bump and crowd…infuse
Their sunrise glow - the perfect rainbow-red.

The priceless, Holland-choice, symphonic hues,
Impress a smile from lovers’ lips, a test.
They lean and bend. They bump and crowd. Infuse.

In comely youth, great happiness expressed -
Relinquished to the bulbous fate of time.
Impress a smile from lovers’ lips, a test.

The glass panel aflame - half-dozen rhyme   
In partial sun.  Such glory circumscribed,
Relinquished to the bulbous fate of time.

Across the morning sky, their light imbibed.
Each vibrant cup with verdant leaves adored.
In partial sun - such glory circumscribed.

When glimpsing life through glass, don’t bind with cord.
Don’t try to straighten tulips, dear - they spread.
Each vibrant cup with verdant leaves adored.
Their sunrise glow - the perfect rainbow-red.

4/20/2022
AN ORIGINAL TERZANELLE
Sponsor: Milton Hankins
HMS and Rhymezone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Hind Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 7:32 PM
Gosh, you did this form justice. What a beautiful poem, the first stanza really hit me...
Rose  Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 2:38 PM
this is very well done Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 8:38 PM
Thank you, Rose!
Meadows Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 12:48 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 3:30 PM
Thank you, Jeanette!
Watt Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Congrats for your top win!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Thank you, John! :)
Bradinger Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 11:12 AM
English is not my first language so please forgive me that my vocabulary is limited. I simply say: Your poem is like music and I can smell the flowers. Congratulations on first place!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Thanks, Anton! :)
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Kim, fantastic win. I admire your easy flow in this most difficult poetry style. Congrats you certainly deserved the top spot!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Thank you, Barbara!
George Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 9:20 PM
So beautiful Kim. I feel terzanelle and villanelle are two very difficult poetic forms ! I don't dare to experiment on them. Congratulations on your first place win ....
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 9:26 AM
I enjoy trying different forms. It stretches us! :)
Gasun Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 7:07 PM
Fascinating! I love tulips although I haven't seen one yet but portrayed well in your terzanelle! CONGRATULATIONS on your trophy win and this outstanding poem my dear friend Kim! Thanks a lot for sharing! God bless you always. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Thanks so much, Len!
Agustin Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 6:50 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, very picturesque as well as wisdom-filled. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Thank you, Beata! :)
Peck Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Your Terzanelle is just gorgeous, Kim! I love your bit of philosophy: when glimpsing life through glass, don't bind with cord. Congratulations on First Place
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Faulkner Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 12:10 PM
This is written so beautifully, love your vibrant rainbow red cups of tulips (and they are one of my favorite flowers) Happy to congratulate you on your well deserved trophy!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 6:25 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 10:33 AM
Wow. Definitely a fave!!! Congrats, Kim. God bless you, Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 6:25 PM
Thanks for faving, Gina! Bless you too!
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May 4, 2022 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations well-deserved, Kim, on your trophy win in my terzanelle contest. Your poem really stood out to me, and I thank you for sharing it in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 9:47 AM
I am so excited! Thank you so much, Milton!!
Trifiatis Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 5:04 AM
What a plethora of glorious imageries, my dearest, Kim! I loved it. Be blessed!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 5:10 AM
Thank you so much! I appreciate your visit! God bless!
George Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 10:14 PM
"Each vibrant cup with verdant leaves adored. In partial sun - such glory circumscribed". ......Love these lines ! A great entry for the contest , Kim !
Rodrigues Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 5:11 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa!
Daniel Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 7:17 PM
Awesome poem, Kim, I know these are tough to write, but yours flows smoothly:) love the sunrise glow and partial sun lines:) simply brilliant:) a fav:)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 8:38 PM
Thank you, Jo xx
Watt Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 5:54 PM
Beautiful lines in this one... I liked "In partial sun - such glory circumscribed" the most. Sounds like you really know your tulips! Hope you enjoyed your Easter, my friend ~ John
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 6:44 PM
Thank you, John! I hope you had a nice Easter!
Wolf Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 12:46 PM
Now I hope you don't mind that I've been trying to straighten out my two lips for years, Kim!... Seriously, this is a splendid write, methinks. So many splendid lines to reflect upon. ~ Flowers and Fragrance, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 3:18 PM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Buehler Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 12:27 PM
Your beautiful images are full of light, color and joy. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Woodrow Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 9:36 AM
beautiful write :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Cheney Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 7:43 AM
I really like tulips and also your poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Thank you, Kenneth!
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April 21, 2022 at 2:01 AM
Great descriptions. I was fortunate to visit Holland and admire the tulips among other things. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 4:38 AM
Sounds wonderful!
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