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Premiere Contest WinnerSunlight Farewell

Against the setting sun, tall trees are silhouettes The sparrows circle, then swoop down, to gather leaves, and violets They'll work to form their woven nests Small fragrant bassinets A sun slides down to take a rest, and leaves a crimson crown So gently, then, without a sound, light fades behind the hills Our ills are left behind, as well.....'till darkness slips around
______________________________________________________________ For Contest #236 Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Lovely win Carrie, congratulations...
Grasso Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Beautifully written, Carrie! Congratulations on this trophy win! ...Fran
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 8:13 PM
Congratulations, Carrie! Your poem is lovely!
La France Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Carrie congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem ~
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Congratulations on your first place win.
Haight Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Carrie. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
Selfa Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Congratulations Carrie! I am so proud of you. You have accomplished a lot. I look forward to seeing even more blessings come to you in the future. - Hans
Milliner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Lovely visual throughout every line! Congratulations on your win....
Capitano Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:03 AM
Wonderful imagery. Congrats on #1.
Kimathi Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 4:22 AM
A beautifully penned piece!! Congrats Carrie, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Nunez Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 12:59 PM
Beautifully penned as all writes that come from you, Carrie. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 8:36 PM
this is very pretty!!! Congrats on your win.
Lindsay Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 5:28 AM
another gorgeous descript of the sunset, well done ;)
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Carrie, thanks for the golden imagery. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
La France Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Carrie, you' have painted a beautiful scene with words 7 and thanks for visiting my poem all that I am
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 7:54 PM
VERY nice, Carrie. I love this contest of hers because I adore the sun.
George   Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 8:19 AM
So clearly I see this vivid image you have created, Carrie. Simply beautiful. Elaine
Lindley Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 11:08 PM
Definitely a super 7. So much in just 7 verses. Painted a most pleasing mind's eye picture!! A7
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