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Sun and Sand Minichu

Spread blankets on the sand. The sea was cold! Let’s warm ourselves beneath the sun. Take hold my hand. How blue the sky! You’ve made this beach day so much fun, sweet guy! Let’s kiss. The day is done. Bliss! Spread blankets on the sand. you’ve made this beach day so much fun - bliss! Jan. 26, 2021 for Mohan Chutani's Sun And Sand Minichu Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/3/2021 12:06:00 PM
Back with congrats on your winning work. Way to go ..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2021 6:57:00 AM
A sweet write. :) Congratulations on the win Andrea! Linda
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Date: 2/3/2021 6:23:00 AM
Nice one, Andrea. Congrats on your win~
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Date: 2/3/2021 5:12:00 AM
Lovely romantic creation with so much fun!!! Congratulations.
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Date: 2/3/2021 3:19:00 AM
Andrea, thanx for participating in my contest and finding it a place fit to romance on the beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan
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Date: 2/2/2021 6:15:00 AM
Ahhhh!! Romantic work. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Your presence at my page was insightful. Sara
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:52:00 PM
aww, this is a very sweet piece
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:20:00 PM
So cute dear Andrea! Your poems are giving breaths of fresh air.. More to come!!
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Date: 1/27/2021 11:19:00 AM
It's too cold to do anything like that here on the east coast of North America. Your write has me longing for warmer summer days.
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Date: 1/27/2021 6:46:00 AM
Way to go, Andrea, I see a winner:)
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Date: 1/27/2021 4:27:00 AM
Haven't rea what this contest is all about. There's a pattern to it. Definitely it is very romantic. ~~
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Date: 1/27/2021 3:49:00 AM
A lovely moment well captured. SO romantic Andrea. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/27/2021 3:23:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I have forgotten what this form is. Senior moment. LOL..Sara
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Date: 1/26/2021 8:22:00 PM
I like this poetic journey to a beach to warm my winter day. Your lat line captures it- bliss.
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Date: 1/26/2021 7:46:00 PM
Beautiful! You are a stellar poetess!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/28/2021 9:14:00 AM
thanks, such a nice compliment.
Date: 1/26/2021 6:41:00 PM
A lovely day with someone special to share it with. Nice. Really good imagery here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/26/2021 3:24:00 PM
Hi Andrea, This is my kind of setting. You can't go wrong with a blue sky, the beach, and a kiss that brought much bliss. I enjoyed your romantic write from start to finish. Best wishes in the contest. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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