Sun and Sand Minichu

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When I want to find peace and my life is in turmoil, sorrow, and sadness I release all, to the sun I let the sand be a madness such fun, to fly with great gladness high ! When I want to find peace, I let the sand be a madness, high ! __________________________ January 4, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme-Minichu/Sun and Sand Copyright Protected, ID 01-1318-544-04 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Sun and Sand Minichu sponsor, Mohan Chutani, Judged 02/02/2021 Fifth Place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2021 10:11:00 AM

Creative work. Way to go with this winner. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2021 10:42:00 AM

Sara, thank for the compliment and comment _Constance

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/3/2021 7:20:00 AM

Very nice Constanc. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2021 10:42:00 AM

Linda, thanks for the compliment and congratulations _Constance

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/3/2021 6:21:00 AM

I like where you took this and your choice of repeated line. Very nice. Congrats on your win, Constance ~

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2021 10:43:00 AM

Line, thanks for the congrats and comment _Constance

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/3/2021 3:11:00 AM

Constance, thanx for participating in my contest and finding peace and release on the beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2021 10:43:00 AM

Mohan, thanks for a great contest and my placement and for the comment and congrats, appreciate a lot _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/4/2021 4:00:00 PM

Kick up the sand and sun, in volume! Love this too!

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2021 10:21:00 AM

Kim, thank you so much for visiting and commenting on my poem, at the moment in my city the only thing I could kick up is snow _Constance