Sun

SUN Gold disc Flaming sphere This glowing Frisbee is lamp of earth and sky, shedding beams of light on all “Source of energy from eons” June 5, 2022.

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/14/2022 2:10:00 PM

I like your thoughts on the sun, Valsa. Thanks for putting them into this poetic form for us to enjoy. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/9/2022 9:40:00 PM

Very descriptive and solid! Oozing with celestial charm. Blessings my friend.

Ann Foster

Date: 6/7/2022 7:43:00 PM

This was well written. Ann

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/6/2022 10:15:00 AM

Imagine if we were to sidle up to the sun for warmth, we would become scorched and become a fiery flare, no longer recognizable, a human pile of dust. but hey, it's always fun in the sun, where it and I, are one. Lovely poetry my lovely Valsa. hugs, Blessings, Jennifer.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/6/2022 8:48:00 AM

A bright pyramid that illumines cosmic poetry, dearest Valsa, Blessings!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/6/2022 4:41:00 AM

This glowing Frisbee is lamp of earth and sky, shedding beams of light on all Valsa, you have done an incredible job with this. This amazing poetry is enhanced by your profound metaphor as well as your lovely diction, both of which contribute to the overall magic. Best of luck to you in the contest!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/6/2022 2:00:00 AM

A lovely discription of the sun Valsa, haven't seen it for days lol. Tom

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/5/2022 11:35:00 AM

Beautiful!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/5/2022 10:24:00 AM

We would certainly be lost without it! Yellow frisbees need an happy-face smile! Enjoyed, Valsa! Aloha!

Timothy Ray

Date: 6/5/2022 8:48:00 AM

this poem reminded me of why in our long pursuit of answers the sun was worshipped...you took me into long ago Egypt...Akhenaten and the step into the unity concept of God...thank you, this is the wonderful part of poetry, how often our lines lead us into other paths..

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 6/5/2022 7:47:00 AM

Your writing is always metaphorical correct. I could not reply as I was at hospital. Might end there for a time as I'm not well.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/5/2022 6:58:00 AM

Lamp of earth and sky--such a wonderful metaphor. A brilliant write my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/5/2022 6:31:00 AM

WoW! Valsa, You have penned a well-written entry for the contest. I found it to be such a meaningful write on the sun. Your last line summed it up very well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis