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Summertime

School ends with screams of jubilance, laughing carelessly as the ski boat is readied for a splash in the nearby lake. Spinning reels whizz as they are hurled into thick underbrush at water’s edge, trying for the big bass that hurdled the drifting log occupied by a family of vacationing water turtles. Ker plunk went the dog as he dove for the stick that was thrown into busy water, scaring the turtles and the big bass; producing screams of shock from wet residue. Under a shaded willow tree, couples take in the breeze and reserved atmosphere with a quaint picnic-basket, talking softly in whispers. Children get up a game of baseball with cheers and shouts encouraging grandpa to hit a homerun. Hotdogs and hamburgers sizzle on the stone fireplace as children and adults patiently wait to savor. The sun fades and slowly occupants meander tired and burned from the summertime sun, lightly moaning. Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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Date: 4/14/2010 8:27:00 PM
Wish you all the best in the contest
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Date: 4/14/2010 8:26:00 PM
Well penned poem I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/14/2010 7:10:00 PM
You captured "The Sounds of Summer" well, nice one!
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:53:00 PM
Well done, Caryl!! What an enjoyable summer day of food sizzling, children playing....the sounds of a delightful day in the sun...and i love the last line, .."lightly moaning" perfectly said!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:38:00 PM
Wonderful write for the contest Caryl and good luck with this terrific Summertime scenario .. my entry is Summer Sensations if u care to read..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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