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Summer Would Never End

I saw winter reflecting in your springtime eyes and knew as long as I was with you summer would never end

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Paloma P

Date: 12/16/2016 6:14:00 AM

Such a cleverly written seasoned sentiment Chris! :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 8:08:00 AM

Thanks so much Paloma.

Darren White

Date: 12/16/2016 2:07:00 AM

I am going to read this to my loved one. I am sure he'll love it as much as I do (But perhaps he already read it)

Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Darren, I hope he likes it.

White Wolf

Date: 12/15/2016 5:28:00 PM

I really enjoyed this, Chris! Very well done my friend! I'm starting to appreciate the shorter poems now!

Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 8:08:00 AM

Thanks so much Rick. I'll have to try to write a few more short ones. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/15/2016 4:36:00 PM

Hi Chris, in a few words you managed to say a lot. Like always it was very romantic. The last two lines really touched me " As long as I was with you, summer would never end".Well done. :-)Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 12/15/2016 4:57:00 PM

Thank you my sweet friend. Your kind words always make me smile

Jan Allison

Date: 12/15/2016 3:52:00 PM

oh Chris this is so dreamy! :-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 12/15/2016 4:55:00 PM

Thank you my friend, I am thrilled you liked this one.