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Summer Twilight

Sunset finds its sweet repose in tangerine hues upon the sea Palm trees bow their sleepy heads As the moon looks down impatiently

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James Inman

Date: 6/9/2016 2:56:00 PM

Lovely write Joseph.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2016 6:01:00 PM

Good to see six more comments on this one since i closed the contest. That is why I enjoy the contests with more winners than premiere. We can see more poems we would not maybe have seen before. I still love this one!!

John Fleming

Date: 5/31/2016 2:19:00 PM

Hello, Joseph. I have read four or five of your poems tonight...I have to say all good stuff; You certainly know how to turn a line or two. This little beauty is particularly good; most elegant - and really quite charming! My very best regards, Joseph. :) john P.s An obvious seven.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/30/2016 2:51:00 PM

- A beautiful gem, Joseph - Congratulations one more time - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2016 9:54:00 AM

what a lovely quatrain :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/27/2016 9:06:00 PM

A very lovely Quatrain, Joseph. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2016 9:05:00 PM

Perfect rhyme in this little quatrain , Joseph. I really enjoyed this. Congrats.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/27/2016 7:38:00 PM

I was hoping to see this a top winner Joseph! Congratulations on your great placement my friend. Very deserving! #7 ;)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/27/2016 2:39:00 PM

Beautiful twilight...excellent quatrain. Well done, Joseph, and congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/27/2016 12:23:00 PM

Wow, this is great...I especially like the last line. congrats. BG

Lukas Ficklin

Date: 5/27/2016 10:06:00 AM

Orange is my favorite color because of the awe inspiring sunsets.... My personal fave for the image it created! Congrats

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/25/2016 2:36:00 PM

I love the tangerine hues.... actually I love every line.. it paints a picture that reminds me of when I was in Florida recently... sunset is my favorite time of day. Saving this in my faves.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/23/2016 3:45:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/22/2016 5:24:00 PM

This is a beauty! Love it. BG

David Mohn

Date: 5/22/2016 4:15:00 PM

this is terrific Joseph...beautiful flow

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/22/2016 3:41:00 PM

Ahhh Joseph, I love the way you write! With just a few simple lines you have changed my mood. Thank you for that! #7 ; ) PS...twilight is my favorite time of day!