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Summer Rain

Sounds of tiny tap dancers atop my tin roof. Umbrellas and goloshes cast aside. More tempting to children than candy or ice cream; Mud puddles to splash in have arrived. Earthlings so grateful, a powerful thirst had begun. Relief from a long, parching summer sun. Run-offs to falling ponds, giving to rise; Aquatic creatures there sing to the skies. Ignighting our senses when a whiff is obtained; Nothing like the smell of a fresh summer rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/11/2014 8:19:00 PM
A great win for a fine write! Big congrats !!
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Date: 8/11/2014 7:34:00 PM
It looks like you are finally on top of me :) ...congrats
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Date: 8/11/2014 2:53:00 PM
The farmers in my area were worrying about the lack of water until they were blessed last week with a nice summer rain. A many million dollar rain, just in time. Congratulations on your win with a lovely poem.
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Date: 8/11/2014 2:22:00 PM
congrats on your win in my contest Arlene, beautifully written
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Date: 8/11/2014 6:05:00 AM
I too love the smell of the rain, Arlene. Congrats on the win
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Date: 8/11/2014 4:58:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Arlene ! beautiful pic painted,, tiny tapdancers,, more tempting to kids than icecream,,real one,, congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/11/2014 4:45:00 AM
wonderful imagery a well deserved winner - i adore the first line and when it is raining heavily i will think of tiny tap dancers! Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:36:00 AM
Very nicely penned Arlene...best wishes
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/18/2014 10:05:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph!. Best wishes right back at ya!. Hugs. Arlene
Date: 6/16/2014 10:54:00 PM
Nice Aarlene,,,,I did the spring storms ...All the ss's were difficult...yours is great....hugs Tim
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/17/2014 9:24:00 PM
Thanks, my friend...hugs..Arlene..
Date: 6/16/2014 7:52:00 PM
Oh perfect, puts mind to shame..BG
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/16/2014 8:11:00 PM
Oh, Barbara! Thank you and I highly doubt this would put any to shame.. Hugs.. Arlene..

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