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Summer Fun

I dreamt last night of innocent days gone by under the watchful eye of a summer sun. My imagination was all I relied to chase away boredom, to frolic in fun. Hide-and-seek whispers and little girls' laughter, no responsibilities to look after, a visit to grandma's, a ride on a plane, my bubblng excitement, I could not contain. I dreamt last night of summer days at the lake under the watchful eye of my proud grandma. In cool, cedar waters, new friends I would make, our bronzed limbs splashing until August's withdraw, and high like a hill waiting to climb, a slide towering o'er heads and smooth waters. To glide down in wet bathing suits was a speedy thrill. Like our summer secrets, happily we'd spill. written September 6, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/11/2013 9:14:00 PM
Hello Rhonda :-) hope you are doing well... stopping by to say hi, and to say you are missed. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Summer Fun" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2012 11:19:00 PM
Rhonda, a wonderful congratulations with your awesome win in craig cornish's " Summer Fun " Xool contest. ~ :-) take care* PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 12:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Rhonda!! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 9/14/2012 9:08:00 PM
wonderful poem, congratulations on your win. lee
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Date: 9/13/2012 11:06:00 AM
this is fascination personified, rhonda.. .congrats on your fine win.. ) huggs!
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Date: 9/13/2012 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Rhonda!! :)
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Date: 9/13/2012 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning entry...Just beautiful! Cynthia
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Date: 9/13/2012 7:09:00 AM
Wow these are fun reads..slip & slides YES!!Congrad's on your win. Thanks for the emories! Light & Love
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Date: 9/13/2012 2:30:00 AM
Brilliantly written! So happy to see this one on the winners list. Congratulations Rhonda!
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Date: 9/12/2012 8:27:00 PM
what a cool metaphor and play on words, like our summer secrets, happily we'd spill. Clever fun poem on summer. BIG congrats.
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Date: 9/12/2012 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations Rhonda lovely summer memories xx
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Date: 9/12/2012 7:14:00 PM
Ah those days when everything was exciting and fun. Congratulations Rhonda. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2012 8:19:00 AM
Your poem is SO WONDERFUL giving me a nostalgic feeling my dear Rhonda. Thank you soo much for sharing. Good luck and best wishes always!!!! luv and hugs, leonora
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Date: 9/7/2012 7:59:00 PM
sweet poem Nate'
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Date: 9/7/2012 5:47:00 PM
makes me think of my summers with grandparents and great aunt and uncle out on the boat at clendening lake
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Date: 9/7/2012 12:42:00 PM
Certainly sounds like a whole lot of fun Rhonda. Enjoyed this write of yours and now I can't wait for Summer to show her pretty little face over here in Cape Town ;) enjoy the weekend ahead.. Love Wilma
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Date: 9/7/2012 6:57:00 AM
My weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Rhonda. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2012 8:59:00 PM
This is a great way to spend have some Summer fun. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 9/6/2012 8:56:00 PM
This is a very awesome rendition of a perfect summer month! August has left us and now it's time for Fall to begin...and I'm for one very excited for it to come! If you hadn't noticed already Autumn is my favorite time of the year, I love everything about it! Halloween is probably my most exciting event of the year! Anyway, your poem is wonderful for the summer, I felt it seeping into me as I read this write! A very grandiose piece this write is my friend! Great Work!!
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