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Summer Church

summer church waving hand fans sermon drones on praying for end times redemption at the door

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Constance La France

Date: 10/28/2015 11:29:00 PM

Thomas, you described it perfectly, when I was younger I thought the service would never end, now I am a bit more tolerant ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2015 4:07:00 PM

oh I absolutely adore this, redemption at the door. YES, Sir, that is SO true!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/27/2015 5:31:00 AM

Especially love the final line Thomas! you do excel at these short forms:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/27/2015 12:09:00 AM

again, the tanka master obverses keenly the snapshots of church rituals... wow, thomas!.. huggs