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Kaleidoscopic colors burst, illuminating velvet skies. Warm summer air ignites a thirst. Kaleidoscopic colors burst, while awestruck murmurs are disbursed, and cannon booms cause babies cries. Kaleidoscopic colors burst, illuminating velvet skies. 5/24/15 For Andrea's Summer Triolet contest Tied for 3rd place

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Date: 5/21/2021 3:19:00 AM
Been looking at your triolets, Kim. This one caught my eye - love the use of kaleidoscopic, such a pretty word. Great take on July 4th celebrations. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/15/2015 3:53:00 PM
This is a lovely take on this summer triolet, Kim; rather unique in content. Congrats on your podium finish:) // paul
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Date: 6/14/2015 6:23:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Kim
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:26:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Kim. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/13/2015 6:25:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/13/2015 6:39:00 PM
Thank you, Skat! I appreciate it!
Date: 6/13/2015 5:35:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/13/2015 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 6/13/2015 12:50:00 AM
A really nice one for the fireworks picture, Kim! GREAT triolet meter and form. One tiny thing: babies' would have made it perfect! Congrats in my contest.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/13/2015 6:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Andrea! As I said in your blog, this was the first triolet I had written. Also, thanks for pointing out my punctuation error. I think I need a punctuation refresher course.
Date: 6/13/2015 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win:) Alexis
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/13/2015 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 5/29/2015 12:50:00 AM
Awesome imagery in this magnificent piece! I rate this a "7!" Pandita
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/13/2015 6:34:00 PM
Thank you for stopping and reading my poem, Pandita!
Date: 5/28/2015 5:22:00 PM
Enjoyed, Kim! Excellent writing!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/13/2015 6:33:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging words, Thomas!
Date: 5/25/2015 7:53:00 PM
beautiful poem Kim, enjoyed .. *always, S.K.A.T.*
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Skat! I appreciate it.
Date: 5/25/2015 4:05:00 PM
YOU GO KIM! AWESOME
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:38:00 PM
Judy, thanks for your enthusiastic encouragement. I appreciate it!
Date: 5/25/2015 12:50:00 PM
- Dear Kim, a beautiful poem - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/25/2015 12:00:00 PM
Beautiful. Love the "Kaleidoscopic color burst". A 7. Blessings for the contest, Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:36:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I appreciate your encouragement.
Date: 5/25/2015 11:46:00 AM
Great triolet, Kim! Perfectly matches the visual, too. Good luck in the contest :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:35:00 PM
Thank you, Laura! I appreciate you stopping by and commenting.
Date: 5/25/2015 11:45:00 AM
beautiful triolet Kim good luck in the contest - need to start on mine soon! hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:34:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Appreciate you stopping by to read and comment.

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