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Summer Celebration

Kaleidoscopic colors burst, illuminating velvet skies. Warm summer air ignites a thirst. Kaleidoscopic colors burst, while awestruck murmurs are disbursed, and cannon booms cause babies cries. Kaleidoscopic colors burst, illuminating velvet skies. 5/24/15 For Andrea's Summer Triolet contest Tied for 3rd place

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/21/2021 3:19:00 AM

Been looking at your triolets, Kim. This one caught my eye - love the use of kaleidoscopic, such a pretty word. Great take on July 4th celebrations. Congrats on your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2015 3:53:00 PM

This is a lovely take on this summer triolet, Kim; rather unique in content. Congrats on your podium finish:) // paul

Joseph May

Date: 6/14/2015 6:23:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Kim

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/13/2015 8:26:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Kim. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 6:25:00 PM

Kim, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/13/2015 6:39:00 PM

Thank you, Skat! I appreciate it!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2015 5:35:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/13/2015 6:38:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2015 12:50:00 AM

A really nice one for the fireworks picture, Kim! GREAT triolet meter and form. One tiny thing: babies' would have made it perfect! Congrats in my contest.

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/13/2015 6:37:00 PM

Thank you so much for my placement, Andrea! As I said in your blog, this was the first triolet I had written. Also, thanks for pointing out my punctuation error. I think I need a punctuation refresher course.