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Summer Breeze

Swinging in the hammock, on a restful day Embraces me with calmness, in every sway A summer breeze calls to me, everything’s ok Never knowing what life, will bring my way A summer breeze calls to me, everything’s ok Faith holds me in the air, what can I say Soon my thoughts are floating, above me, a treat This breeze in the summer, is oh so, sweet! A summer breeze calls to me, everything’s ok Never knowing what life, will bring my way A summer breeze calls to me, everything’s ok Faith holds me in the air, what can I say I feel like a feather, falling light through the air I’m letting go of worries in the sky so fair A summer breeze calls to me, everything’s ok Never knowing what life, will bring my way A summer breeze calls to me, everything’s ok Faith holds me in the air, what can I say Heidi Sands 8/5/18 Placed 5th in the Summer Breeze contest.

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/13/2018 6:12:00 AM

Such an intriguing and marvelous poem. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thank you JW. I appreciate your kind feedback. and you are welcome :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/13/2018 4:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Subimal :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/12/2018 7:43:00 PM

Back with congrats Heidi..a great win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/12/2018 7:23:00 PM

Congrats on your win Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

John Hamilton

Date: 8/12/2018 3:59:00 PM

Such a nice lyric Heidi, congrats on a nice placement!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2018 4:04:00 PM

Thank you very much John :)

John Gondolf

Date: 8/11/2018 12:22:00 PM

Heidi, your lyric gives me such a calm easy feeling. I enjoyed it. Best of luck in the contest. John

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/11/2018 1:29:00 PM

That is nice to hear John. I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/9/2018 9:07:00 AM

" it's good to be alive" maybe... Keeping swaying on your hammock of life...All the best Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2018 12:30:00 PM

Thank you Arturo :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/8/2018 7:59:00 AM

A breath of summer wind in a poetic breeze...well executed my friend...love & a light breeze...^WW^

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2018 8:17:00 AM

Thank you very much WW. I hope all is well :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/7/2018 3:51:00 PM

your breezy melody gives me pure delight, heidi... good job, ohh!..huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/7/2018 4:50:00 PM

That is great to hear today Nette! Thank you :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/7/2018 1:52:00 PM

A delightful and inspiring poem that uplifts the soul and fills the heart with joy dearest , Heidi! Loved it! Good luck my dear friend!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/7/2018 2:24:00 PM

I am happy to hear that. Thank you Demetrios :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/7/2018 12:23:00 PM

How utterly comfortable to read Dear Heidi, best wishes in the contest...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/7/2018 12:25:00 PM

Thank you Charlie :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/6/2018 8:34:00 AM

A nice lyric you have written, Heidi:) all the best for a wonderful win:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/6/2018 9:16:00 AM

Thank you very much Jo :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/6/2018 3:19:00 AM

Lovely lyric Heidi, I can feel that breeze, welcome in the summer heat. Good luck. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/6/2018 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Yes it is welcome, through the heat waves going on :) Have a nice day.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/5/2018 6:51:00 PM

Hello Heidi your poem is beautifully written. I felt the breeze . Have a nice evening my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2018 6:57:00 PM

Thank you Darlene. I am happy to hear that. I hope you have a nice evening too :)

Roy Pett

Date: 8/5/2018 6:21:00 PM

Beautifully written Heidi, summer breeze is a great song and you have done it justice with your lovely Lyric, good luck in contest. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2018 6:54:00 PM

Hi Roy. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Bette Bavington

Date: 8/5/2018 5:20:00 PM

It has a nice rhythm. I love the way the hammock swings in the breeze kind of like your poem. It makes you feel like you are there enjoying every minute.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2018 6:02:00 PM

Thank you Bette. If it makes you feel like you are there enjoying it, I can't ask for more than that :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/5/2018 4:08:00 PM

I like the airy feeling in your words..floating lightly to please..just like the summer breeze. Your poem uplifts, Heidi. Best for a TOP win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2018 4:15:00 PM

Happy to hear that Vijay! Thank you very much :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/5/2018 4:01:00 PM

A reassuring summer breeze..Wonderful write Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2018 4:15:00 PM

Thank you very much Joseph :)