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Image result for mango trees on a beach

Sun glistens with brilliance on tropical seas.

Under a palm tree we sit as a breeze

Meanders the island, and ripened on trees,

Mangoes are hanging – to pluck if we please!

Enjoying nature, we are sun’s devotees

Relaxing to beach songs, completely at ease.


Date Written: March 31, 2019
Sponsor: Dear Heart
Contest: Writing Challenge 6, March 2019 - 6 Lines Poetry Contest 

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Date: 4/17/2019 9:25:00 PM
Ahhh! Now I long for the sea, a white beach, and something wonderful to drink with a pink umbrella in it. This carried me to a time when summers were heavenly... before the fires.
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Date: 4/6/2019 12:13:00 PM
Andrea, rhyming this cheerful acrostic makes it seem like two forms in one. Brilliant! Are you sure you don't live in Hawaii? : ) Congratulations on being on the top of the list with your FIRST place win! xxoo
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Date: 4/5/2019 3:37:00 PM
Nicely done verse, Andrea, congratulations on your first place win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2019 12:08:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your first place win in my contest with this lovely summer poem, I am dreaming,it snowed here today, like the image too ~
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Date: 4/3/2019 8:49:00 AM
My congratulations for your first placement in the contest. Indeed a lovely poem.
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Date: 4/3/2019 4:11:00 AM
- A beautiful winning poem, congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/2/2019 8:27:00 AM
Hello Andrea, just by reading this poem,I long for the summer to begin.
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Date: 4/1/2019 5:41:00 PM
Excellent write as usual, Andrea!
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Date: 4/1/2019 4:17:00 PM
I love this Andrea!...love the rhyming Acrostic!...summer sounds so good right now!...I remembered you said you don't always get to replies...not sure if my last entry has a form, just something I tried :)...if YOU find a name for it, let me know. have a good one :)
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Date: 4/1/2019 2:06:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Andrea!
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Date: 3/31/2019 9:07:00 PM
G'day Andrea … flows beautifully and makes me feel I should be there - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 3/31/2019 4:56:00 PM
I loved the tone and flow of your poem..an invitation to summer..lovely imagery, Andrea
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Date: 3/31/2019 4:05:00 PM
Your summers seem to be the best of the best; this is but one of your marvelous tropical specialties my friend. Lovely; I hope you actually do go here all the time.
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Date: 3/31/2019 3:50:00 PM
This one brings back fond memories. The accompanying foto looks similar to our friend's place in Bermuda where Vera and I spent many wonderful times lounging about back in the day! We met in Bermuda and it was one of our favorite vacation spots. BoB
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