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Sun glistens with brilliance on tropical seas. Under a palm tree we sit as a breeze Meanders the island, and ripened on trees, Mangoes are hanging – to pluck if we please! Enjoying nature, we are sun’s devotees Relaxing to beach songs, completely at ease. Date Written: March 31, 2019 For the 'Bite Size Poem no7' Poetry Contest of Line Gauthier

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 6/20/2021 7:23:00 PM

Congrats, Andrea, on your win for this rhymed beauty! Carol Louise

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2021 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your summer write. I wish I was in your picture by the water it looks wonderful. Enjoy your win with blessings..............

Greg Gaul

Date: 6/18/2021 8:06:00 AM

Clever monorhyme to be sure. Quite a tour de force wedging "devotees" in there. Kudos for that alone!

Edlynn Nau

Date: 4/17/2019 9:25:00 PM

Ahhh! Now I long for the sea, a white beach, and something wonderful to drink with a pink umbrella in it. This carried me to a time when summers were heavenly... before the fires.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/6/2019 12:13:00 PM

Andrea, rhyming this cheerful acrostic makes it seem like two forms in one. Brilliant! Are you sure you don't live in Hawaii? : ) Congratulations on being on the top of the list with your FIRST place win! xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 4/5/2019 3:37:00 PM

Nicely done verse, Andrea, congratulations on your first place win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2019 12:08:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your first place win in my contest with this lovely summer poem, I am dreaming,it snowed here today, like the image too ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2019 4:11:00 AM

- A beautiful winning poem, congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/2/2019 8:27:00 AM

Hello Andrea, just by reading this poem,I long for the summer to begin.

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/1/2019 5:41:00 PM

Excellent write as usual, Andrea!

Chris Hagy

Date: 4/1/2019 4:17:00 PM

I love this Andrea!...love the rhyming Acrostic!...summer sounds so good right now!...I remembered you said you don't always get to replies...not sure if my last entry has a form, just something I tried :)...if YOU find a name for it, let me know. have a good one :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/1/2019 2:06:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Andrea!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/31/2019 9:07:00 PM

G'day Andrea … flows beautifully and makes me feel I should be there - thank you Andrea - Lindsay

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/31/2019 4:56:00 PM

I loved the tone and flow of your poem..an invitation to summer..lovely imagery, Andrea

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/31/2019 4:05:00 PM

Your summers seem to be the best of the best; this is but one of your marvelous tropical specialties my friend. Lovely; I hope you actually do go here all the time.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 3/31/2019 3:50:00 PM

This one brings back fond memories. The accompanying foto looks similar to our friend's place in Bermuda where Vera and I spent many wonderful times lounging about back in the day! We met in Bermuda and it was one of our favorite vacation spots. BoB