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a... bridge came as...diction... 'airy'...and as... a full loss... of 'why'... a rewrite solution... as ideas re-patterned... and...spelling of words... such as 'know'-ledge... saw...a cambridge...diction... airy of philosophy... stans sand

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Constance La France

Date: 9/23/2022 1:42:00 PM

Stan, love your poem, and the unsaid between the lines, wonderful. Thanks for visiting my poem today, My Tao Path, I had to change it a bit and I added another stanza, hope you can come back, blessings

Sand Blown
Date: 9/24/2022 6:18:00 AM

thanks for the comments.....we speak again.....stan

Jeff Kyser

Date: 9/23/2022 6:42:00 AM

philosophy ==> phyllo’d sophie ==> layered wisdom ==> truth blurbs ==> proof herbs ==> proverbs

Sand Blown
Date: 9/23/2022 7:37:00 AM

...thanks man.....reflections of the world (called realities) fall back on basic vocal sound re-arrangements.....language is a vegetable soup of endless sound flavors....have a good one.......stans sand