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Sugar Binge

Gold and moist the cupcakes rise
Almond flavored;  sweet.
In one dash with time precise;
Hunger sneaks a feast.

Mouth aglow, I take a bite
Till I nibble eight.
Sugar- binge, my sheer delight
Though I’m overweight!



Andrea Dietrich's ' Have You Tried a 7/5 Trochee?'
4/13/2015

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2015

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Skat A Date: 5/3/2015 9:54:00 PM Nette, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 5/2/2015 9:59:00 PM Congrats on your win Nette, now\have a blessed one! Agape, Moses Login to Reply

David Fisher Date: 5/2/2015 8:17:00 PM This was funny and perfectly finished...it hits the spot, Nette Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 5/2/2015 7:57:00 PM Cute as a cupcake! Congrats. BG Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 5/2/2015 12:14:00 PM Nette, overweight by sugar binging is a sweet idea. Congrats. Mohan Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/2/2015 11:17:00 AM Lovely, sweet and tempting, Nette!! Congratulations on a very deserved win. Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Judy Konos Date: 5/2/2015 10:10:00 AM Congratulations....Clever & Fun read Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/2/2015 8:56:00 AM Ahh!! Great quality work!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 5/2/2015 7:23:00 AM Nette, a beautiful treatment of the recurring challenge of chocolate -- BET YA CAN'T EAT JUST ONE!! congrats. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/2/2015 6:33:00 AM Love the humour here Nette - the cake sounds delicious but I can see you do not over indulge you are so lovely:-) many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/2/2015 12:40:00 AM Good one:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/2/2015 12:36:00 AM Nette, you did my 7/5 Trochee proud!! And for the first time in a long time, you fooled me. I had no idea you wrote this one because always you do more nature themed poems! Loved this. congrats. Login to Reply

Julia Ward Date: 4/15/2015 11:51:00 AM Great fun! A 7 from me. Hugs, Julia Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 4/15/2015 9:28:00 AM nette, delightful, you made me want a taste, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, In The Forest Den Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 4/14/2015 8:17:00 AM Such a sweet poem, Nette! Excellent flow of words for the form. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 4/14/2015 3:13:00 AM Very tasty cupcakes of almond flavored to pass time. Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. i feel 7+ here. Loved always,bl Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 4/13/2015 9:20:00 PM So sweet the words. So sweet the cupcakes... Now you made me want chocolate donuts.. A7 and great write! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/13/2015 11:31:00 AM So nice to read your verse this morning. (But LOL did you have to make me hungry?) Keep up the good work. Light & love Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 4/13/2015 11:06:00 AM Its both amusing and entertaining all in one fine poem. Well done. Emile. #7 Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 4/13/2015 4:58:00 AM An adorable quatrain; sugar binges are a fact of life...why fight them? Login to Reply

Nandita Das Date: 4/12/2015 10:12:00 PM Wow, this is deliciously delightful....#7 Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/12/2015 4:48:00 PM Cute one..Those sugar binges can be rough..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for fhe visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply

Manny Paras Date: 4/12/2015 12:44:00 PM Okay, did you have to rub it in? Lol! I have this fancy for my mother's brownies. You are sneaky, top-of- the cream poet, Nette Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/12/2015 12:37:00 PM - Take a bite ..... and you just want more .... and more :) - Sweet - I wish you best of luck in contest, dear Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Rhoma Em Date: 4/12/2015 11:46:00 AM Those sugar moments, I can't refuse! And the last two lines spoke to me; impressive. Thank you for your greetings! Login to Reply

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