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I crouched at the edge of the narrow rivulet Watching the tiny critters furtively forage Among the damp driftwood and shiny stones, Some surely glancing up and seeing my face May have thought me their god, amazingly, Or simply curious about life at a simple stage Like humans might wonder if God watches From some faraway star blinking back tears, They thought nothing of me staring at them At all. But I am sure they knew I was there, Looking down into their most primitive world Which, containing everything they needed For survival, was sufficient for their wellbeing, And thinking, as they did, their world sublime Perhaps with basic creek babbling sounds they Uttered a word of praise and thanksgiving That, as I crouched, I did not scoop them into The palm of my hand and quickly bring them To an exotic paradise hence to suffer and die, So, I bid farewell, arose, and walked away.
written October 23, 2021

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Date: 10/25/2021 2:26:00 AM
To me this would be sublime "And thinking, as they did, their world sublime Perhaps with basic creek babbling sounds"
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/25/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. I often did this sort of thing when I was a young lad. I would sit by a creek and observe the crayfish, whirligigs, and other creatures. It was fascinating to me.
Date: 10/24/2021 7:33:00 PM
I think that, when I see lots of ants, all busy with their daily chores. And I put antrid down to get rid of them or squash them underfoot... I don't enjoy doing this.... great poem...
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Date: 10/24/2021 7:36:00 PM
I have infestations of ants in my kitchen in the summer. I hate to put out the ant traps, but I do. If they want my respect, they have to respect my kitchen!!!!
Date: 10/24/2021 5:23:00 PM
Terrific Milton.....love this. When I kayak I drift among swans, geese, ducks, and muddy faced muskrats and his next to the heron. why can't, or won't, we learn from the "lesser" creatures.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/24/2021 5:31:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, John, and I appreciate your thoughtful comment, too.
Date: 10/24/2021 4:46:00 PM
I really found this an interesting perspective. I, myself, have often " thought," through the eyes, mind or ears of creatures, what it's like for them.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/24/2021 5:32:00 PM
It is a very interesting perspective, to be sure. Thanks for your comment, Virginia.
Date: 10/23/2021 9:28:00 PM
Hello Milton ... not too many in this modern world of comfort realize that these 'dumb' creatures survived for eons before us humans came on the scene - a thoughtful verse indeed Milton - Lindsay
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/24/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thanks so much, Lindsay, for your thoughtful and interesting comments. They are so welcomed.

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