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Upon the slow-flowing river, Suddenly swans Scud quickly away. From round the bend I gracefully glide, I am the queen of them all. And quickly my king arrives. The dance of love begins. We bob our heads, wings quivering, Necks entwined. Unruffled snow-white plumage. In time my eggs are hatched, Cygnets are so cute. How quickly they grow. Now we are a royal family Suddenly swans.

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/29/2023 4:03:00 PM

Enjoyed you "Swan Love" poem, Victor. Have a peaceful weekend, my friend. Bill

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/20/2023 6:01:00 AM

Swans mate for life ya know. I adore them so. Lovely piece my friend, enjoyed! Sending love and well wishes your way vb, xomo!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/20/2023 6:13:00 AM

BISOUX<3

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/20/2023 6:10:00 AM

X xx

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/1/2023 3:30:00 PM

Victor your charming poem is 34 on the top 100 Best Poems List! :D

Eve Roper

Date: 6/29/2023 12:55:00 AM

Back again, love the write,, you are so good of telling stories. Many Blessings my friend

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/27/2023 1:08:00 PM

My friend, great beauty is white swans gliding along on the pond. Your verses sing that and much more. A fav... God bless.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/27/2023 12:03:00 PM

A smooth flowing poem on a slow flowing river: swans and romantic moments take centre stage. ~ Regards // paul

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/27/2023 5:40:00 AM

Victor, your poetry is truly enchanting. Swans, with their elegance and allure, embody the very essence of romance. And let us not forget the darling cygnets, destined to blossom into magnificent swans with a touch of magic.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/27/2023 4:32:00 AM

Hello Victor. Good Afternoon. This is lovely endearing and much more. I see and read so much beauty. You do know how to create imagery... - Have a beautiful afternoon. May today be a good day and all that it can be. Love and Blessings now and always (smile)

Valsa George

Date: 6/26/2023 8:14:00 PM

Beautiful image and a lovely poem to go with it matching every detail of the picture with the poem. Wonderful job dear Victor. White swans gliding on water surface is always a delight to the eyes.

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/26/2023 7:21:00 PM

God has his own poetry. what we do with pen and paper God does with flesh.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/26/2023 9:47:00 AM

Grace, beauty and charm are imbued in these lines. Delightful poem.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/26/2023 9:09:00 AM

Enjoyed reading.. many blessings my friend

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/26/2023 8:11:00 AM

Very delightful.Victor. So well crafted .. Panagiota

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/26/2023 6:36:00 AM

A poem beautiful as swans. The dance of love begins. We bob our heads, wings quivering, Necks entwined--perfectly done, Victor.

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/26/2023 5:29:00 AM

Delightful! You get a FAV! from me. I love Swan Lake. Blessings my friend!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/26/2023 5:19:00 AM

First of all…the brilliant title! Love that first verse! I can picture the whole event! Beautiful and wonderful imagery, my friend!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/26/2023 3:44:00 AM

Victor, a sweet poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/26/2023 3:38:00 AM

what a charming poem Victor, I go on a walk down to the harbour before work and I love watching the swans, and then the cygnets which follow:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/26/2023 1:49:00 AM

Lovely poetry Victor, swans are the epitome of romance, admired for their grace and beauty, those adorable cygnets too whom to soon become suddenly swans… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2023 1:45:00 AM

- Together for life... beautiful love :) - A beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs