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each day I take a walk in the park and spend time with the white swans drifting with such grace on the flowing river just watching I can watch them forever their beauty unfathomable and peaceful what a gift they are then . . . what a surprise to behold a swan comes floating close with a baby on her back I think she was showing me her little one back and forth she paddles fluffing up her wings then suddenly swans come from the green reeds and wildflowers paddling quickly in a circle dance baby swans come to say hello . . . _______________________ April 4, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Suddenly Swans Copyright Protected, ID 19-1131-130-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 4/8/2019 12:37:00 AM
I love the imagery, and hope this is true!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/8/2019 5:54:00 PM
Caren, thanks so much for the visit and the sweet comment !
Date: 4/6/2019 2:16:00 AM
Cool poem Chica -JT
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Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2019 5:53:00 PM
JT, thanks for visiting and the compliment ~
Date: 4/5/2019 11:14:00 AM
A lovely entry for Mo's contest Constance. We only have black swans here. Both are really beautiful. Have a lovely Easter. xxoo : )
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Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2019 4:41:00 PM
Connie, we have mostly white swans here but some black, I agree both are amazing, thanks for the lovely ~
Date: 4/5/2019 1:37:00 AM
Such wonderful lines my friend, I love swans so much and I can picture everything in your poem. Best wishes in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2019 4:42:00 PM
Kudzai, thank you for the lovely comment ~

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