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her comforting, loving arm draped across his broad shoulders to sweeten the bitter pill... of withering grief. Submitted for... Bite Size Poem No.34 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Date written: 01/30/2022

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Date: 11/12/2022 2:07:00 PM
touching ~
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/14/2022 2:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line:-)
Date: 2/2/2022 1:15:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win, you showed grief in a deep way ~ Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/2/2022 1:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Constance:-)
Date: 2/1/2022 11:06:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win. You have painted a visual and emotive picture that perfectly describes your title. Wonderfully done my friend. Blessings and good health to you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/1/2022 3:02:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and your continued support, Sam:-)
Date: 2/1/2022 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/1/2022 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paula:-)
Date: 1/31/2022 8:09:00 PM
Beautiful poem in a form which I do not know at all. Meaning is very clear. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/1/2022 5:49:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj:-) I find the Dodoitsu form quite fun! Try it sometime.
Date: 1/31/2022 6:02:00 AM
I can feel this. Well written Edward! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/31/2022 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi:-)
Date: 1/30/2022 11:41:00 AM
Strong poem, Edward. I felt the emotion of the moment as I read the poem. New form for me. First one I've seen. I like it. Write On! Bill
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/31/2022 7:35:00 AM
Thank you very much, Bill:-)
Date: 1/30/2022 11:24:00 AM
Excellent!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/31/2022 7:35:00 AM
Thank you, Kim:-)

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