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Success

So, what is success? Failures I confess at times given me value far greater – therefore, not clear whether better to succeed or impede? follow or lead? starve a fever feed a cold -- success, not measures of silver and gold rather sterile earth not a patch of sod If to be certain, just once that I had pleased~ God --

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Date: 5/12/2025 1:35:00 PM
I loved reading your wonderful "Success" write. Great Ending... Oh yes, to please God, I hope each day. Have a very blessed day writing away..........
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/12/2025 10:26:00 PM
No greater joy! I try...but...who knows what God is truly thinking.... Hope I get some things right.
Date: 5/11/2025 12:44:00 PM
Sincerity Joe Dimino...I beleive God values that? What do I know though? Just a fool in lifes play So I must listen and pray.'
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/12/2025 4:59:00 AM
Must listen and pray...lots of wisdom in that, Joe. Thank you for deeply reading and commenting. Have a great week!
Date: 5/10/2025 6:01:00 AM
Yes, true success in life comes from doing the Father's will. Nice write Joe
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/10/2025 6:57:00 AM
Hi Tom; thank you, have a blessed weekend.
Date: 5/10/2025 1:20:00 AM
Good to please God every blessed day. Great poem.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/10/2025 6:59:00 AM
Hi Victor; what the heck. I keep trying regardless. Blessings my friend.

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