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Stuck In a Loop

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'Sweep me off my feet Singing, "ain't this life so sweet?"' David Gray I love when I'm swept away Out of myself Just in love with existence Connected to music or art In flow I'm unsure what my conscious mind does for me, my subconscious is far more adoring and adored I'm going to dance off singing the same two lines of the song over and over* *a loving child advised I must stop and claimed I was causing suffering to the dog :D so I sang in a traffic jam on my own to my heart's content.

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I Am Anaya

Date: 10/6/2023 9:02:00 AM

Song and dance, "So Beautiful" and so is your voice. :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/6/2023 9:08:00 AM

Aww you're a sweetie, just trying to create little pockets of being rather than only poems about stuff. I find writing without thinking frees my mind. Thank you for your kind support x

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/6/2023 6:13:00 AM

Lovely, yeah there are days when this happens:)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/6/2023 7:13:00 AM

I'm out with friends this weekend - we'll see whether I'm in the zone then. I'm sure I'll share :)

Silent One

Date: 10/5/2023 12:51:00 PM

You sang it well.. Hope the dog is ok..

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/5/2023 1:08:00 PM

If he could talk he'd tell everyone it's the best bit of his day. Thank you :)