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Stress Leaves

I dip my toes in The river water is cold Nice on a hot day It flows fast over the rocks Stress leaves with water today Heidi Sands 8/12/17

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Roy Pett

Date: 8/13/2017 6:28:00 AM

Lovely Tanka Heidi, I feel stress free now after visualising the images within your well written poem. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 7:28:00 AM

I love to hear the poem can be stress relieving to read! Thank you Roy :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/12/2017 6:40:00 PM

What an imagery dearest, Heidi. If only all our stress was that easy to abandon our bodies we would be stress free nevertheless your poem and its wording could help someone relax to the point of exclaiming: I am free of stress! Wonderful meaningful Tanka!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 8:03:00 PM

Yes, the more we can do to be stress free the better, Demetrios. Thank you for your kind comment today :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/12/2017 10:19:00 AM

Hi Heidi, I enjoyed this feel good write. Nice scene as well. Well done:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 10:22:00 AM

Hi Alexis. I am happy you enjoyed this one. Thank you :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/12/2017 10:07:00 AM

Cool meditations this poem be, Heidi. Got good positive vibes from reading this poem. Nice write. Love and smiles.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 10:22:00 AM

Nice to hear! Thank you Freddie :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/12/2017 9:36:00 AM

Water brings a sense of calm...lovely write Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 9:38:00 AM

Yes Joseph. I love being near the water. Although, I love where I am now, my other favorite place I lived was on a lake in NH. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/12/2017 8:42:00 AM

A calm feeling of stress disappearing--good work Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2017 8:32:00 AM

- Sounds delicious, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine. There is a beautiful, relaxing river nearby :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 8/12/2017 8:28:00 AM

Beautiful read as always!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 9:22:00 AM

Thank you, Mike :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/12/2017 7:50:00 AM

This is an awesome Tanka, I loved the relaxing feel of it and the peacefulness that exudes from its pores! I really enjoyed reading your remarkable poem this morning, keep writing like this and you'll have a wonderful portfolio! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Russell. I am happy you could feel the relaxation. I am grateful for your support :) Have a nice day today.!