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Stream Of Joy

Dawn draped in sunburst sky, jade hills adorn. Melted snow surges in torrent of brook, cascading beguiled, down the verdant vale, like my yearning spurts for you, stream of joy.
September 30, 2020 Photo used : #1 Syllable count : 1/2/3/4/10/10/4/3/2/1 Checked on Contest : Double Tetractys 3 Sponsor : Eve Roper

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Date: 10/10/2020 3:44:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your descriptive and expressive winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/2/2020 5:51:00 PM
Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Subimal, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"
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Date: 10/2/2020 2:59:00 PM
Your poem reflects lovely imagery and emotion, Subimal. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/2/2020 7:59:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your third place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Subimal! Linda
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Date: 9/30/2020 12:24:00 AM
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