Jan Allison Poet Personification

Stove - For Contest

I’m smooth and sleek with cute curves
I always manage to attract your attention
You can’t wait to get your hands on me ...
Know all the right buttons to press
I can feel my temperature rising
Sometimes I can get so steamy
You can hear me hiss with excitement
At times I have been known to bubble over
I can feel myself burning with desire to please you
Oh man I can get so so hot
With your deft fingertips you can control me
Soon my job is done and you are totally satisfied
When it’s all over you leave me to cool down
Then you can’t wait to caress me with a damp cloth
Oh how I love it when you do that
I just can't wait until you turn me on again

Contest ~Tribute to a Major Appliance
Sponsor ~Mary Oliver Rotman
09~10~15

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Arthur Vaso April 1, 2016 at 10:33 AM Very very creative, had me smiling, and super congrats on the Win!!!! Jan Allison April 1, 2016 at 11:28 AM Many thanks Arthur its an old poem but still makes me smile:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 13, 2015 at 1:04 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Jan! Jan Allison October 13, 2015 at 3:03 AM Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A October 10, 2015 at 12:05 PM Jan,, Congrats on your win. **SKAT** Jan Allison October 10, 2015 at 1:58 PM Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper October 9, 2015 at 5:39 PM Back to congratulate you good job!!! Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 5:41 PM Thanks Eve I'm so glad Mary enjoyed my poem:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus October 9, 2015 at 1:24 PM You are a smooth and sleek writer, Jan! Your ability to play on words is remarkable:) Congratulations on this deserved win! Hugs // paul Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 1:25 PM LOL Paul... I hope I have curves in the right place too lol:-) hugs Jan xx

George Aul October 9, 2015 at 11:04 AM Told you it was a great, sexy poem. Congrats, Jan............... George Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 11:18 AM Aww thanks George I'm delighted Mary liked it:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak October 9, 2015 at 10:37 AM Wow...wants to make me start thinking about how my bed must feel. Great win! Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 10:41 AM Thanks Dan :-) hugs Jan xx

Carrie Richards October 9, 2015 at 9:50 AM So funny how you were able turn the stove into an x-rated appliance !! LOL ! Congratulations, Jan! Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 10:04 AM LOL Carrie I wasn't sure if it was too hot for the contest I'm please Mary liked my take on the theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 9, 2015 at 9:12 AM Congratulations in your win. Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 9:15 AM Thanks for dropping by with yur congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin October 9, 2015 at 8:54 AM Congratulations on a well-deserved win! I remember enjoying this poem very much and thought I had commented. Don't know what happened there. I think it's great and have since I first read it ... CayCay Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 9:01 AM Thanks CayCay I was worried it may be a little toooo hit lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight October 9, 2015 at 8:17 AM Hi Jan, congratulations on your 2nd Place win! I knew this one would be on top first time I read it! Hugs, Sanda Jan Allison October 9, 2015 at 8:21 AM Thanks so much Sandra I am delighted to place so high I thought it may be a little toooooo hot lol:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser September 14, 2015 at 2:10 PM Ooo to be a Stove ;-) nice one Jan. I'll never be able to look the Stove in the eye again, hugs//James xx Jan Allison September 14, 2015 at 2:19 PM LOL Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight September 11, 2015 at 12:02 PM Wow, Jan! This is fabulous! You have such great imagination! I can see this at the top! Hugs, 7+Fav, Sandra Jan Allison September 11, 2015 at 1:45 PM Thanks Sandra just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts September 11, 2015 at 2:37 AM loved it Jan, made me laugh out loud...Seren Jan Allison September 11, 2015 at 2:53 AM Thanks Seren I had fun with this one:-) hugs jan xx

Afolabi Muideen September 11, 2015 at 2:04 AM Hi Jan I love how your subject was constructed... Your magical pen is eloquence; makes the reader to inhale its beautiful and intoxicated their mind and sense. Your write has turned me into a drunkard lol!. Great work, good luck in the contest dear poet......lovely...........A.M. Jan Allison September 11, 2015 at 2:52 AM LOL drunk on my words now that is a first:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2015 at 9:23 PM just reading this one again. wish I could remember how you did it the first time, Jan!! Maurice down here sure uses big words!! Jan Allison September 11, 2015 at 2:51 AM I adore Maurice's humour Andrea and thanks for dropping by again:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler September 10, 2015 at 9:01 PM Novel subject and only you could have pulled this delightful poem off. It has to be a winner in my book. Never realized a stove (or range, as we say here in the USA) could be written anthropomorphically! Thanks for reading about my poem on Mildred. / M Jan Allison September 11, 2015 at 2:50 AM I had fun with this one Maurice I just hope its not too hot for the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker September 10, 2015 at 6:32 PM well played...this should do very well indeed. good luck in the contest Jan Allison September 10, 2015 at 6:34 PM Thanks Frederic it is a fun write I hope Mary likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

George Aul September 10, 2015 at 5:05 PM I'll never look at my stove the same way again :-) ........... George Jan Allison September 10, 2015 at 5:10 PM LOL George I hope it's not too hot for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri September 10, 2015 at 5:00 PM This is great Jan. Personification to its best. Fun fun! Jan Allison September 10, 2015 at 5:09 PM Thanks Njeri just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper September 10, 2015 at 4:42 PM Love the stove it's my life saver if the electricity goes off you can always depend on the gass stove to keep you warm. Hugs Eve Jan Allison September 10, 2015 at 4:44 PM We have gas too so can always have access to food and drink - as long as I can boil water for a cuppa I am ok:-) hugs jan xx

Eric Boddie September 10, 2015 at 4:25 PM what a great example....of how words can just trample....every thought of my mind....you created a masterpiece this time....;) Jan Allison September 10, 2015 at 4:38 PM Thanks Eric just a bit of fun hope its not too hot for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne September 10, 2015 at 3:24 PM LOL, good one!! Jan Allison September 10, 2015 at 3:32 PM Thanks Jack I hope it's not too hot for the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2015 at 1:39 PM Jan, YOU are marvelous :))))) - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison September 10, 2015 at 2:51 PM Aww thanks Anne Lise I just had fun with this contest:-) hugs jan xx

Heather Ober September 10, 2015 at 12:26 PM This is hilarious! What a clever way to do this contest. I loved the "hissing with excitement" part. Amazing. Jan Allison September 10, 2015 at 2:51 PM Thanks Heather I hope it's not too hot for the contest lol:-) hugs jan xx

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