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Stormy Sea

I watch a coral glow of sky and see it mirrored by the sea; I wish for eagle wings to fly - away from you, away from me, away from what has come to be. The sun ship rode pale aqua waves the first day that I saw your face; today take back the love you gave, free me from your black embrace, these bitter memories efface. You bade me sail your golden sea by rays of morning sun inflamed, your burning passion scorching me; your stellar love boldly proclaimed has left me broken and ashamed. Your sea turned dark and stormy, I tossed upon a violent gray; with sea urchin spines thorny, you goaded me to sail your way and left my heart in disarray. I long to skim the sky, leave behind your misery; I long for eagle wings to fly - away from you, away from me, away from what has come to be. Copyright, August 15, 2015 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 1/31/2016 10:23:00 PM
FAYE, Congrats on your win in "Edward Ebbs" contest. LINDA -
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Date: 1/24/2016 10:15:00 PM
FAYE, Congrats on your awesome, win. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 1/24/2016 9:15:00 PM
Congrats Faye, thank you for entering this contest :)
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:18:00 PM
Epically sad and yet a fine poem presenting the hope of flight. And yes, sometimes flying away ifs the perfect solution. I know from experience myself, long ago.. Adding this poem to my fav because its a gem and it struck me deeply my friend! A7
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Date: 8/16/2015 10:37:00 AM
I love how you began and ended on similar ending couplet lines! WEll, actually, completely the same That was a cool effect. I got mine finally finished too, it's just not posted yet. GREAT writing here!
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Date: 8/16/2015 10:00:00 AM
Faye, you pen of a sad love tragedy A7 and thanks for visiting my February poem
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:27:00 PM
A lovely melancholy piece full of great imagery.
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