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Storm of Love

the face of my wife was as dark as the storm that raged and boomed outside the drab motel room . I stood at the window observing the angry lightning, thunder in my heart , knowing full well for both of us , this was the end of love .

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Date: 5/6/2022 8:52:00 PM
I know this is fictional.... ! Even in good relationships, at times, there can be stormy moments.
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Date: 8/10/2021 10:36:00 AM
Wow! Victor, You penned such a good write on how a relationship can be and how it can end. Well done. Have a great day-Alexis
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Date: 8/10/2021 2:17:00 AM
A sad write Victor, fictional though it may be the words describe the melancholy felt perfectly … Belle
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Date: 8/9/2021 7:10:00 PM
Powerful. The storm serves well for an argument, and after the storm lost love. very well done.
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Date: 8/8/2021 5:57:00 AM
A powerhouse of emotion!
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Date: 8/7/2021 9:14:00 PM
Wow… you see the face in the dark storm; I love the metaphor in this verse.
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Date: 8/7/2021 12:38:00 PM
I am sure you invented this one!! But it was a great read, Victor.
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Date: 8/7/2021 10:48:00 AM
The sad end of a love affair, coinciding with the fury of the storm, creates a vivid and remarkable contrast in this lovely poem. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
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Date: 8/7/2021 8:58:00 AM
such a sad, intense write dear Victor, but beautifully written as always my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 8/7/2021 8:24:00 AM
An intense etheree, Victor! Such a sad ending - I hope its fiction. Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/7/2021 7:52:00 AM
Whoa!! Very expressive and emotive work. I hope just a work and not in real life. Lightning struck here one day this week and it shook the whole house but we had no idea where until when doing some mowing of the fields my husband saw a huge oak with half of its bark stripped off and lying on the ground. I hope it wasn't that bad. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 8/7/2021 7:18:00 AM
Deep and sad bur beautiful write...
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Date: 8/7/2021 6:31:00 AM
Oh! this was dark and sad, but captivating, Victor:) earthly love can only stay strong for so long:)
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Date: 8/7/2021 5:01:00 AM
The storm was ominous. Love is so fragile. Well written, as always, Victor.
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Date: 8/7/2021 4:51:00 AM
Human nature intertwined with Mother Nature, a huge revelation! Blessed by your poetic pen to spill that huge weight in a wonderful unique poetry, Victor! Always a great pleasure to read your work of mind and soul.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 8/7/2021 4:08:00 AM
wow, what a punch line. So visual, I love it.
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Date: 8/7/2021 2:47:00 AM
- After a storm, there will be sun, it is said ... but, maybe not always ... great written, Victor :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2021 2:36:00 AM
Wow, if we must quarrel a thunderstorm will add to the atmosphere that's for sure..Nice etheree Victor
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Date: 8/7/2021 2:14:00 AM
The atrocious weather added to what was already a gloomy situation. Tom
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