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Storm Love Note / Trois Par Huit

Strong winds blew note from my hand to you We both had bent down to pick it up Upon rising your head hit my hot coffee cup That was the beginning of my great good luck I must admit in this anecdote It was blank, no words wrote Storm love note entry for Jared Pickett's contest: Trois Par Huit Placement: 3rd place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/2/2010 1:05:00 PM
I missed this the first time around..Terrific job. glad to share 3rd with you.. BG
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Date: 6/2/2010 8:43:00 AM
I have enjoyed judging this contest and have given this poem a ticket to the winners circle.... Congrats my friend.... I hope to see you in my Rondel contest.....:JP]
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Date: 5/21/2010 10:26:00 PM
I ran out of space thats never happened before~anyway , thanks for the honorable mention with "Danny"~~~~~~And your poem is very nice, a whirlwind romance perhaps(no-words need be spoken or in this case wrote~Thanks
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Date: 5/21/2010 10:22:00 PM
~Danny was my sisters first husband my nephews dad and a very good friend of mine from the age of 14 (my sisters first love) grew up across the street from him- he had just left my house that day over 2 yrs ago and was killed in a tragic car accident~still miss the man with a heart of gold~my poem was originally called "friend" , but I dedicated to him after the lord called him home so quickly~there I got that out,Really never shared that with anyone!~God bless you
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Date: 5/21/2010 8:39:00 PM
Wish you good luck in the contest. Humor flows
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