Storm

Dense demons bloom forth bulbous towers of emotion piercing the limits of our atmosphere while in my eyes the sun is shining the blue is all he sees for this storm engaging calm is me and mine alone to brew.

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/14/2019 10:30:00 AM

Super intense Maureen. I didn't expect you to be the storm. Wonderful!!! Thank you.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/15/2019 7:41:00 AM

Thank you Jeff! And what a storm.The story, laid out in poems. My stint as a pariah. A dog park love square drama, and watering hole divide scandal. Though come to think of it, I haven't actually written of the pariah part much...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/31/2018 12:35:00 PM

Lovely Mo! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/30/2018 11:55:00 PM

Love it, Maureen. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/31/2018 12:15:00 AM

Thank you Line :) blessings my friend xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2018 8:04:00 PM

Nicely done! Congrats, Maureen!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/30/2018 9:55:00 PM

Oh thank you Kim! I did not know :) yay, it's an old poem, delighted it's seeing light of day. Cheers lovely xomo

John Michaels

Date: 3/5/2017 6:17:00 AM

Some intense imagery here. I especially like the "Dense demons bloom forth" line. Well done!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/5/2017 11:30:00 AM

Ty John :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 2/10/2017 9:58:00 AM

Wise words

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/9/2017 12:30:00 PM

- A deep poem .... the storm will be silent ... let it pass, Maureen - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/9/2017 1:16:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise! It did move on. Twas flip side of Poets Kiss.. Joined this site to revisit and reignite my poetry which along with my painting hasn't been flowing for far too long: a writer's/artirst's/soul's block. xomo :)