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Morning Awakening: 1877-78
by Eva Gonzales

Stone Keepsakes

Love lingers, in the objects of stone left behind,
holding pleasing recollections of welcome footfalls;
the painful memories, most, spent of love declined.

Those last few months of harborless shores, the squalls 
fade, as I gaze on the jade keeper left bedside,
holding pleasing recollections of welcome footfalls.

The blade of horn, carved with love's protection, bides.
An owl of stone my guardian makes nightmares
fade, as I gaze on the jade keeper left bedside,

I have keys given me in faith, your love declared.
Though trust given, never was withdrawn, never died.
An owl of stone my guardian makes nightmares

fade, and over gold-amber earrings; I still cry.
Yes, you are goodly gone, and that I truly know;
though trust given never was withdrawn, never died.

Happy times of kisses warm, of love bestowed,
love lingers, in the objects of stone left behind.
Yes, you are goodly gone and that I truly know,
the painful memories, most, spent of love declined.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Nunez Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 9:03 PM
The form really suits the subject and tone of this write. Every day and every contest is a learning process. I love the nuances, the gentle caress of a word appropriately used...oh I so appreciate how you do it! Thanks, Deb. Congrats!
May Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Beautiful piece Debbie....when all else fades, love lingers on....Congrats on a great win....hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 12:23 PM
Second line last stanza should be first line stanza one. Unless I am mistaken which is entirely possible.
Guzzi Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 3:56 PM
Thanks Richard I think I have rewritten this at least 5 times!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 8:34 AM
An incredible write. I see you took some poetic licence with the second line in the last stanza. Congratulations on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Hey Richard let me know what you are seeing if it needs correcting I'd like to do that THANKS>
A  Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 1:37 AM
Debbie, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
A   Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 12:54 AM
this is a sweet win DG. PD
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Congrats for the win. It is sure a classy poem, Debs!
Wigley Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 9:10 PM
Lovely write, Debbie. congratulations. A work to be proud of. Viv x
Hamilton Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 12:39 PM
great poem Debbie congrats on placing hugs
A  Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 2:03 AM
Sweet win, ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 5:57 PM
AHA, I got it. As I read it, I was trying to figure out what form you were using (I had not seen the form when I began reading) As I got to the end I was able to realize it was terzanelle. that form is so awesome for a poem like this one. big congrats for your well deserved win.
Poteet Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Very nice, Debbie. Congrats on your top placement...I like keepsakes better than objects, any reason you didn't use the word on your poem itself? Objects sounds so unromantic.
Guzzi Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 11:01 AM
hmmmm I did use Keepsakes in the title a very prominent place so I'm a bit puzzled by the comment?
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 8:45 AM
Hi Debbie great. Congrats on win ..love rajat
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Beautifully written Terzanelle. Congratulations on your high win Debbie.
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Debbie, every time I try to write a Terzanelle .... I tears-em-up. Fantastic job with this form and a magnificently written poem. I can feel the longing and lose of those who stay ashore as love sets sail leaving only stone memories to sustain it.
Hamilton Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 2:00 AM
excellent Debbie congrats on win
A. Sharma Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 11:32 PM
Debbie a superb write n an awesome win! Big congrats !
May Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 8:18 PM
Great write and win Debbie...Congrats
Gorelick Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 5:38 PM
This has a medieval quality to it...its a lovely piece. Congrats on your big win. BG
Yvonne Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 5:18 PM
One more thing Debbie, I have noticed some of your comments in the blogs. I love your huge heart. I am proud to know you. God Bless and Lots Of Love.
Yvonne Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 5:15 PM
Brilliant write Debbie. Congratulations on your huge win. Fav.Lots Of Love.
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:59 PM
love the terzanelle form you've sued with the repeat lines - great poem - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Richards Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 8:07 PM
I am never disappointed while reading your poems.......this one sounds old-world, and classical....melancholy and beautiful. It hit me hard...that last line,....... as our family lost a treasured troubled soul this week.....but his love lingers on. Thank you for this poem. I needed these words today.
O'Leary Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Interesting structure/format... beautiful poem, Debbie... Terry
Anish Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Intresting use of language here! You use some old English phrases here. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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