Stolen Dreams

My mind is upset Stolen goals and stolen dreams Stolen by myself

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Constance La France

Date: 5/13/2018 4:59:00 PM

Caren very deep and thought provoking, well done. Can you check your soupmail, please.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/13/2018 7:04:00 PM

Thank you Broken Wings. I did check my Soup Mail. Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 4:21:00 PM

yes, we do this to ourselves. You got that so right, Karen (well, not always,but usually it is our own fault!)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/13/2018 7:04:00 PM

I was reflecting on the few times I have held myself back. More when I was younger, not so much any more.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/12/2018 9:05:00 PM

Great haiku with a classic surprise ending! Sometimes we sabotage our own dreams! Love it - a winner in my books! Hugs and love. Pandita

Sowjanya Bhat

Date: 5/12/2018 8:43:00 PM

Very... Nice....everyone can't understand that decipher...keep writing.