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Still Is the Rainstorm

Into the evanescing night Floats hope, now restrained to a dream Within the edges which incite Tales clinging unto the extreme : Russet of summer, ebb of tide Blows whispers as rainstorm nears Its last heaving when moons provide, A bright glint reflecting my tears. Although long my amble on hills Time does bestow my earnest bid, To forgive, a strife from love's chills Allowing mist to end tight grid-- Old stories drown under seafloor Through August , warm the hues blending... For magical is the beam ashore My heart at peace ...never-ending. Brian Strand Late Jan 2019 Contest Not entered in any challenge

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Date: 1/27/2019 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nette-- I must confess a bit of envy of your natural grace with words!
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Date: 1/26/2019 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations for your win with this beautiful verse.
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Date: 1/24/2019 1:59:00 PM
So captures the awe and majesty of the volcano, simply sublime!
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Date: 1/16/2019 12:35:00 PM
Your traverse boundaries entering different hues, zones, twilight's, spell bounding your reader with your intense beautiful poetry verses. Wow Nette! I am in awe, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/15/2019 3:13:00 PM
Such a spell binding piece, Nette, as you weave unusual images together..mesmerizing! Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 1/15/2019 2:02:00 AM
So well written Nette, your pen delivers a stunning verse every time. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 1/14/2019 11:03:00 PM
Very well done, Nette, nice write.
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Date: 1/14/2019 5:39:00 PM
Oh I love this Nette. A favorite for me. !! You write beautifully :)
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Date: 1/14/2019 4:38:00 PM
Expertly rendered, Nette..best for a win.
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