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Still Is the Rainstorm

Into the evanescing night Floats hope, now restrained to a dream Within the edges which incite Tales clinging unto the extreme : Russet of summer, ebb of tide Blows whispers as rainstorm nears Its last heaving when moons provide, A bright glint reflecting my tears. Although long my amble on hills Time does bestow my earnest bid, To forgive, a strife from love's chills Allowing mist to end tight grid-- Old stories drown under seafloor Through August , warm the hues blending... For magical is the beam ashore My heart at peace ...never-ending. Brian Strand Late Jan 2019 Contest Not entered in any challenge
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Carber Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 10:41 AM
Congrats on your win, Nette-- I must confess a bit of envy of your natural grace with words!
Faulkner Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 1:59 PM
So captures the awe and majesty of the volcano, simply sublime!
Proxenos Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Your traverse boundaries entering different hues, zones, twilight's, spell bounding your reader with your intense beautiful poetry verses. Wow Nette! I am in awe, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Leiser Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 3:13 PM
Such a spell binding piece, Nette, as you weave unusual images together..mesmerizing! Good luck in the contest! :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 2:02 AM
So well written Nette, your pen delivers a stunning verse every time. Good luck. Tom.
Sharp Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 11:03 PM
Very well done, Nette, nice write.
Sands Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Oh I love this Nette. A favorite for me. !! You write beautifully :)
Pandit Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Expertly rendered, Nette..best for a win.
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