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Still the Same

As I pull into the parking lot and turn the motor off 
the sun is hidden by the clouds.  The rain has finally stopped  
A bit of light spits tiny rainbows from tips of the pines

The old school hasn't changed much, since my children walked the halls...
As if time has been erased.  The old brick walls remain..... 
Ghosts of the past are here to greet me, and
I'm overcome by waves of grief, for the days we have lost

Skinned knees on the playground, and stuck wads of gum under desks
All those years that seem like yesterday, now are photos from the past 
I stop at the office, then wander down familiar trails
Reminded of the teachers, who once had taught my child
Those who have since retired,... Mr. Spencer, Mrs. Schueller, Miss Wilson, Mr. Chew
I wonder where they are now, and who could fill their shoes

I peek into the second grade classroom
And my I see my grandson working diligently
He looks up and sees me with a grin so wide 
And soon a whisper scurries about the room.
Ten more faces are soon grinning at me.
But just then, the bell rings, and one happy little boy
Gathers his coat, and papers, and comes to me
He grabs my hand, and we walk to the car.
The clouds have disappeared.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Paula's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 12:18 PM
I like how you did a final "erasure" image, with clouds dispersing at the end here! VERY nice. Of course, one of the best! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 5:10 PM
Congrats on the win
Sweetheart Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in the Eraser contest with this wonderful write so fine.. enjoy another special honor... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Ryusaka Avatar
March 1, 2009 at 9:38 AM
Wow, thi is a simply gorgeous poem. I love how you describe the scene. Thanks for your comment on Dance.
Degenhardt Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 9:20 AM
I felt like this when my kids had started going to the same school I went to and had those days that I would pick them up. Such memories rushed back. Wonderful flowing details made this such a pleasure to read. Michael
Winter Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 5:22 AM
Too precious Carrie. I hope I live as close as you to my grandchildren that I can pick them up from school too. Just beautiful. Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 12:32 AM
You have made this genre your very own Carrie.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Gass Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 1:28 PM
I love this soft, reflective piece, Carrie. I agree with Chris, you have a beautiful way of taking us with you and your images come alive for us. The clouds disappearing when you are with your grandson is a perfect ending. Excellent work! Love, Robin
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February 22, 2009 at 11:38 AM
Still the same is superb. Such moments captured by you my friend...your gift of bringing eyes into your moments and let them stay a while, watching it unfold is wonderful. I was there and I saw his eyes.. I saw your smile and all thier eyes that encountered you..the clouds disappeared..excellent piece.
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