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Still the Same

As I pull into the parking lot and turn the motor off the sun is hidden by the clouds. The rain has finally stopped A bit of light spits tiny rainbows from tips of the pines The old school hasn't changed much, since my children walked the halls... As if time has been erased. The old brick walls remain..... Ghosts of the past are here to greet me, and I'm overcome by waves of grief, for the days we have lost Skinned knees on the playground, and stuck wads of gum under desks All those years that seem like yesterday, now are photos from the past I stop at the office, then wander down familiar trails Reminded of the teachers, who once had taught my child Those who have since retired,... Mr. Spencer, Mrs. Schueller, Miss Wilson, Mr. Chew I wonder where they are now, and who could fill their shoes I peek into the second grade classroom And my I see my grandson working diligently He looks up and sees me with a grin so wide And soon a whisper scurries about the room. Ten more faces are soon grinning at me. But just then, the bell rings, and one happy little boy Gathers his coat, and papers, and comes to me He grabs my hand, and we walk to the car. The clouds have disappeared.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/7/2010 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Paula's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2010 12:18:00 PM
I like how you did a final "erasure" image, with clouds dispersing at the end here! VERY nice. Of course, one of the best! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:10:00 PM
Congrats on the win
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Date: 6/4/2010 3:22:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in the Eraser contest with this wonderful write so fine.. enjoy another special honor... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/1/2009 9:38:00 AM
Wow, thi is a simply gorgeous poem. I love how you describe the scene. Thanks for your comment on Dance.
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Date: 2/23/2009 9:20:00 AM
I felt like this when my kids had started going to the same school I went to and had those days that I would pick them up. Such memories rushed back. Wonderful flowing details made this such a pleasure to read. Michael
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Date: 2/23/2009 5:22:00 AM
Too precious Carrie. I hope I live as close as you to my grandchildren that I can pick them up from school too. Just beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/23/2009 12:32:00 AM
You have made this genre your very own Carrie.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/22/2009 1:28:00 PM
I love this soft, reflective piece, Carrie. I agree with Chris, you have a beautiful way of taking us with you and your images come alive for us. The clouds disappearing when you are with your grandson is a perfect ending. Excellent work! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/22/2009 11:38:00 AM
Still the same is superb. Such moments captured by you my friend...your gift of bringing eyes into your moments and let them stay a while, watching it unfold is wonderful. I was there and I saw his eyes.. I saw your smile and all thier eyes that encountered you..the clouds disappeared..excellent piece.
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