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Still, I Rise in Color

for the ones losing hair, light, and hope—this is you. They said I was nothing special. Just a crawling thing, skin too thin, eyes too tired, body too slow to ever matter. I heard them whisper. “He looks worse every day.” “She’s losing her hair now.” “Poor thing.” And worse— the pity in their voices cut more than the words. I wanted to hide. Wanted to leave this skin, this pain, this mirror that won’t show me who I used to be. But something small inside me held on. Not loudly— just enough to breathe. They don’t see how much it hurts to keep trying. To wake up with tubes and needles and still smile for the ones who visit. To fight even when the fight has taken everything. But still— I keep going. Not because it’s easy. Because it matters. Like a caterpillar mocked for its shape, for the way it moves, for how “ugly” it looks while becoming. No one claps for the struggle in the cocoon. No one sees the tearing, the blood, the near-death quiet before wings happen. But one day, I will rise. Not perfect. Not untouched. But real. Alive. Wings colored by every wound I survived. And if you ever feel too broken to be beautiful again, remember— a butterfly was once barely breathing too.

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Date: 7/1/2025 1:52:00 PM
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Date: 7/24/2025 1:46:00 AM
Yes, I saw it—thank you so much for reaching out! :) – Becoming Trude from the Ruins
Date: 6/30/2025 6:35:00 AM
Breath taking and powerful tribute to those who survive! A fave! Xo
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Date: 7/24/2025 1:43:00 AM
That truly means so much to me—thank you for feeling the heart behind it. It was written through tears and survival, and to know it reached you... that’s everything. Grateful beyond words ?? – Becoming Trude from the Ruins xo
Date: 6/30/2025 4:05:00 AM
OhMYStars! This one is number one for me, you cleaved my heart, congrats on your win dear Trude, xo
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Date: 7/24/2025 1:42:00 AM
Oh wow, thank you so much! Your words mean the world to me—truly. I’m so glad it touched you. Big love and hugs ?? – Becoming Trude from the Ruins xo
Date: 6/29/2025 11:42:00 PM
Becoming trude from the ruins thanks for your entry and congratulations on your win! Your support in my contest means a lot to me! Please allow me time to get organized and I will format the book and get your final permission much later ok?
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Date: 7/24/2025 1:41:00 AM
Thank you so much—this truly means a lot to me. I’m honored to be part of something so meaningful, and I deeply appreciate the space you created for voices like mine. Take all the time you need to get things organized—no rush at all. I’ll be here whenever you’re ready to move forward with the book. And again, thank you—for seeing my words, for letting them belong. Warmly, Becoming Trude from the Ruins

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