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Still-Life Autumn

With hot coffee in hand,
I am looking out my picture window.
I see the autumn leaves being blown off the trees,
beautiful leaves in colors of red, gold and orange.
Time to leave for work,
out the door I must run.
I am running over a beautiful carpet,
a carpet made from the falling autumn leaves.
Crush~crush I hear,
the falling leaves beneath my purple shoes.
Into my car I must go,
as the frisky squirrels run up a big oak tree.
Autumn when the days turn cool and beautiful,
I know winter will soon be here.
Date Written: 12/15/2022
2 Place
Still-Life Autumn Scene Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 12/29/2022 2:15:00 PM
I love your free spirit and the purple shoes of course, congrats on your win dear Paula. Wishing you every success in 2023
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/5/2023 11:12:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my free spirit and my purple shoes. A Very Blessed and A Very Healthy New Year 2023...........
Date: 12/29/2022 2:22:00 AM
A beautiful picture of autumn you've wonderfully expressed and painted my dear friend. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing! Blessings always. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2022 10:50:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this "Still-Life Autumn" write. Hugs back. A Very Blessed and A Very Healthy New Year 2023...........
Date: 12/28/2022 7:33:00 PM
A hot cup of coffee to greet a beautiful fresh day. Congratulations on your meritorious win dear Paula!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2022 10:48:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this one. Yes, a hot cup of coffee to greet this new day. I love the Fall. A Very Blessed and A Very Healthy New Year 2023...........
Date: 12/28/2022 6:16:00 PM
Paula, You designed the flawless day, and I followed in your footsteps. My sincere felicitations on your win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2022 10:45:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you followed in my footsteps. I enjoyed writing it. I love the Fall time of the year. A Very Blessed and A Very Healthy New Year 2023...........
Date: 12/28/2022 5:47:00 PM
Paula, You set a perfect day and you had me following. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2022 10:42:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. I enjoyed writing this for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it. A Very Blessed and A Very Healthy New Year 2023...........
Date: 12/18/2022 3:54:00 PM
Beautifully expressed for the changing seasons.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2022 9:23:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my "Still-Life Autumn" write. Blessings for a Merry Christmas..............
Date: 12/15/2022 11:08:00 AM
- Autumn is over ... the snow has laid its white blanket here ... early morning we had minus 13 degrees ... brrrr ... - I enjoyed your poems tonight, Paula :) - (I think you have written for almost every contest now :))) - Good luck :) - Sending greetings for a peaceful and lovely Christmas to you and your loved ones :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/17/2022 6:48:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your good luck. You are right, snow~brrrr. It is fun to see/play in. After taking so many months off, I am trying to get back into writing. I need to watch how long I sit for my back pain. A Very Merry/Blessed Christmas/Happy New Year With Hugs, Paula..................
Date: 12/15/2022 10:25:00 AM
Paula, this is a lovely picture held in time, like a still-life painting. Love the sound effects of the crunching leaves. Hope you are well. So happy to see you are posting again! Sending you blessings of joy for Christmas! Best wishes for the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/16/2022 8:51:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your best wishes for the contest. Glad you like my crunching leaves. Blessings for a Merry Christmas..............

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