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Stifled

the old oak on the hill extends its limbs towards me offering as much comfort as you this somber day i sit beneath the willow for it weeps with me and cradles me in its sweeping caress my fingers tear against frustration's flesh the same as this jet stream scratches an ashen sky the clouds part momentarily before my now opened eyes exposing the sky's soul which appears to bleed with less compassion than me it seems before it closes its wound and hides the sun again i struggle to breathe in this cool mist rising between the hush of sighs and the stifle of tears as they fall all around me in puddles of last night's darkness still rising in the dawn of this day

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Date: 1/18/2020 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/18/2020 8:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Brenda :)
Date: 1/17/2020 3:46:00 PM
Congrats on your first in the contest for this truly wonderfully penned poem. Best wishes...Ron :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/17/2020 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Ron :) sometimes nature offers things that you wish others could see... hugs
Date: 1/17/2020 5:10:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh What more could I possibly add?
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/17/2020 10:33:00 AM
thank you Caren :) hugs
Date: 1/16/2020 8:44:00 AM
you write with such subtle intensity. softly spoken sadness swirls like mornings mist. gentle sighs echo on frosty winds heavy breath. I need to be strong, yet I cry. love you poem
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 9:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert...my muse has a way to express emotions.... :) hugs
Date: 1/15/2020 9:33:00 PM
Your 2nd to last stanza, where the sky's soul's exposed --- Wow. That really is a gut-punch. Never saw anything expressed that way before. Bravo, Sandy! Happiness and Joy, Gershon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Gershon...always happiness but sad poems make more of an impact... hugs :)
Date: 1/15/2020 4:03:00 PM
Such a lovely penned piece Sandy, such lovely tones of emotions spread throughout. Blessings,Gordon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 7:16:00 PM
thank you so much Gordon... blessings and hugs :)
Date: 1/15/2020 1:56:00 PM
Excellent depiction, as always, Sandy--between the hush of sighs and the stifle of tears--what a blessed vocabulary!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 7:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay... this was a bus scribble too but it was too long to write on my phone so i texted it to myself and transferred it at home...it was a beautiful scene this morning :) hugs
Date: 1/15/2020 12:31:00 PM
Mesmerizing how you describe natural beauty mixing with emotion, a truly grand gift you have Sandy!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much John...it's something i think i learned at a young age because i used nature to calm me as a child, and now i guess i compare emotions to what i see around me... hugs
Date: 1/15/2020 11:09:00 AM
Stifle, what a great word for the day. Sometimes we push on when we shouldn't. Your poem though is once again, I can't even count how many times I have said this, absolutely beautiful. Your words float across the page and land so softly on my eyes. Though sad, there is still something very special about these thoughts when they flow.
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Date: 1/15/2020 12:19:00 PM
thank you Chris...i wish i could describe the scene, the kids on the bus commented on it... the skies were gray still from last nights rain... we topped this hill and there's a big oak in the lawn with many branches... very old big tree... above it, was the sun, it looked like someone peeled the clouds to show it...such a big huge red ball...but no color in any nearby clouds... it reminded me of a full moon rising, huge, but red...and as quickly as it appeared, it was gone...but the beauty of it... wow...

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