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Stay Upright Snowman stood on his big round head because he had a snowy bed. He had no socks for his toes that is why they up and froze they became frost bitten and red. Limit the Drinking Mister Snowman drank too much it was said. He ended up in the snow on his head. The cold air made him cough and his snowballs fell off. Frost bite is painful, stay at home in bed! 12/23/2017

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Date: 12/25/2017 3:05:00 PM
hahaha, the line about the snowballs. THAT was hilarious!!! Merry Christmas, sweetie and thanks for always leaving such nice comments
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Date: 12/24/2017 12:25:00 AM
This is so good I have to come back!!!!!! Thanks for giving me such laughter!!!!!!!!! Hugs
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Date: 12/23/2017 6:36:00 PM
LMAO this is sooooo hilarious!!!!!! I love it!!!!
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Date: 12/23/2017 5:19:00 PM
Eve, I just love that image of frosty upside down, and your poems are delightful, and great examples for your contest, hopefully I can write something worthy, i am not that good with limerick, it is the silly aspect that I struggle with as you know I am one somber, in the cemetery sort of girl
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Date: 12/23/2017 5:13:00 PM
This is so funny, Eve:) It will be hard to do better than you for the contest! Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/23/2017 3:46:00 PM
Ha ha, this is fun. The poor balless snow man. Merry Christmas Eve and thanks for all your thoughtful visits and comments throughout the year.
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Date: 12/23/2017 1:01:00 PM
Socks for those living in Lochs who don't mess with the Ness who is a mess.
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Date: 12/23/2017 1:01:00 PM
I enjoyed reading these Eve Thanks for sharing :) and Merry Christmas !
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Date: 12/23/2017 12:15:00 PM
A fun write... I enjoyed it..."He had no socks for his toes" Imagine...A snowman...All the best Eve
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Date: 12/23/2017 11:41:00 AM
Lol! Eve, You have penned two funny limericks. Great examples for your contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2017 11:38:00 AM
what fun poems its a shame you can't enter the contest!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/23/2017 11:15:00 AM
Haha! Two great limericks Eve..
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