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Snowman stood on his big round head
because he had a snowy bed.
He had no socks for his toes
that is why they up and froze
they became frost bitten and red.

Limit the Drinking 

Mister Snowman drank too much it was said. 
He ended up in the snow on his head. 
The cold air made him cough 
and his snowballs fell off.
Frost bite is painful, stay at home in bed!


12/23/2017
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Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 3:05 PM
hahaha, the line about the snowballs. THAT was hilarious!!! Merry Christmas, sweetie and thanks for always leaving such nice comments
Vaso Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 12:25 AM
This is so good I have to come back!!!!!! Thanks for giving me such laughter!!!!!!!!! Hugs
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 6:36 PM
LMAO this is sooooo hilarious!!!!!! I love it!!!!
La France Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Eve, I just love that image of frosty upside down, and your poems are delightful, and great examples for your contest, hopefully I can write something worthy, i am not that good with limerick, it is the silly aspect that I struggle with as you know I am one somber, in the cemetery sort of girl
Callus Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 5:13 PM
This is so funny, Eve:) It will be hard to do better than you for the contest! Hugs // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Ha ha, this is fun. The poor balless snow man. Merry Christmas Eve and thanks for all your thoughtful visits and comments throughout the year.
Sands Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 1:01 PM
I enjoyed reading these Eve Thanks for sharing :) and Merry Christmas !
Horn Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 1:01 PM
Socks for those living in Lochs who don't mess with the Ness who is a mess.
Michael Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:15 PM
A fun write... I enjoyed it..."He had no socks for his toes" Imagine...A snowman...All the best Eve
Y. Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Lol! Eve, You have penned two funny limericks. Great examples for your contest:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:38 AM
what fun poems its a shame you can't enter the contest!:-) hugs jan xx
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:15 AM
Haha! Two great limericks Eve..
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