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Scottie dog on his walk
     parading onto sidewalks of quiet drama
his bristling, buoyant hop
                                      on three legs
while an old man, cane in hand, grasps the dog's leash
      a life line between them
      glimpse of resistance
      measured movements
      occasional threads of panic
to claim their space, the edges of a frame,
                                      the lilt of living

others step the circle around them
quick glances to thaw cellphone attention
permitted entry into a private moment
                             that graces the pair 
                             like stained glass light

strength can be a force greater than fear
that shapes the land they tread on
for an old man, cane weary, and his three legged dog
their return walk
mounted together
a noble bearing
    through May's green door
    that summons them forward
    that marks time pressing,
                         to hold their footing







Poem written: May 16, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ashley Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Dear Brian, it's my great pleasure to return to this amazing masterwork and offer you my heartiest congratulations for your excellent final placement in Mark's Marathon contest. I'm thrilled to partake of this soulful poem, brimming with intimate imagery and poignant beauty, once again. It is a grand honor to share the podium with you, Brian, a wonderfully talented poet and inspiring friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 1:23 PM
I adore and admire your narrative approach to poetry, Brian. Indeed, your poetic creations are like cinematic slices of life full of captivating vibrancy. You’re welcome for my enthusiastic applause for your poem. And thank you for your kind and heartwarming congrats as well. I hope all is well, my inspiring friend..
Sambourne Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 7:36 AM
Dear Susan Thank you for your most thoughtful appraisal of my small poem. A narrative approach to poetry like a cinematic scene appeals to me but often not to others. But I pen on. Heaps of congratulations on your first place finish . Best wishes always, Brian
Lane Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 10:47 AM
We all ran a great race. Congratulations, Brian.
Sambourne Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Greetings Lin, Thank you for your congratulatory message. I was not anticipating a placement, so the recognition was a surprise. Be well. Regards always, Brian
Toney Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 1:30 PM
Brian, congratulations on your Fifteenth Place, overall win in my 2022 Poetry Marathon! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of the contest. The poems of the 28 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post, along with the top 15 placements and their overall stats. Write on!
Sambourne Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 4:27 PM
Hello Mark, Thank you for the recognition of my small piece on two stalwarts in my community who fight the limits of their mobility. Best wishes, Brian
Alex Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 11:12 PM
Great narration. Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Thank you Christuraj, for your drop by and note. All the best, Brian
Radice Avatar
July 9, 2022 at 6:20 AM
Back with congratulations Brian. A deserved winner. Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
July 9, 2022 at 6:32 AM
Thank you Gary. Fortunately, the poem had a thumbs up to spark additional submissions. Best wishes, Brian
Watt Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Brian, you've taken an observation from life and transformed it into a poetic tribute to resilience and camaraderie of these two 3-legged survivors... reminiscent of the riddle of the sphinx. Some great phrases and wisdom sprinkled in; I liked "a life line between them" and "strength can be a force greater than fear" the most. All in all, a delightful read and a worthy winner in the marathon. Heartfelt congratulations ~ John
Watt Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 4:01 PM
Those NA's can do a number on our confidence. I choose to ignore them, sometimes successfully, lol. Glad you submitted this one.
Sambourne Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Hello John, My appreciation for your detailed affirmative note on my poem. It received an NA in an earlier contest, hence its inclusion in the Marathon Poetry acknowledgements was a delightful surprise. I was fortunate in the street grit of dog + owner that sparked the tribute. Be well. Brian
Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations on your win. Poor three legged dog. Have a great/blessed day.......................
Sambourne Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 2:47 PM
Greetings Paula, Thank you for the thoughtful congratulations. I hope that you are well + thriving. Sincerely. Brian
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July 8, 2022 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations Brian on your podium finish, and so well deserved too, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem, most of the time we are oblivious to the struggles going on around us in life, but you have an acutely perceptive poetic eye, and a wonderful way of expressing the barely noticeable, in free verse, cheers David
Sambourne Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 3:02 PM
Your thoughtful evaluation of my poem is much appreciated. You've caught my small secret - I try to catch an image + build a poem around it. Fortunately people + the city are a rich mine indeed. Take care, David. Enjoy the summer. Brian
Toney Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 12:16 PM
Hi, Brian. I think this may be the first time we've interacted. I love that the leash is the "lifeline between them... to claim their space, the edges of a frame, the lilt of living." And their "strength... and noble bearing" truly shows their resolve "to hold their footing." From your comments below, these are two buddies you observe in your neighborhood. It must be a sight to see! Congratulations on your podium finish on Mile 6 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 7 has already started!
Sambourne Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 2:58 PM
Thank you Mark, for seeing value in the poem. I am pleased that my piece on two buddies pushing forward in fortitude brought pleasure to many readers. Thanks to all! Best wishes, Brian
Ashley Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Dear Brian, I adore the lovely melancholic yet tenacious spirit of this poem. The intimate imagery of the three-legged pair, a man and his dog, the leash a vital lifeline for both and symbolic of their bond, is brought into soft focus so beautifully. Your insightful poem speaks with elegance of their struggle, casual ageism and disregard while preserving the dignity of your subject. Impressive poetry, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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July 4, 2022 at 8:36 PM
Greetings Susan. Thanks very much for your thoughtful, encouraging comments. Nearby city streets gave me this remarkable scene of endurance. You are right though - there is a melancholy tinge to the pair's bonding. The kinship bond observed seemed to write itself. Thank you again for your uplifting remarks. You're a gem! Be well. Brian
George Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 10:35 PM
Love this beautiful scene of the old man and his dog both three legged ! The dog's lash- "a life line between them" ! What a lively picture you have painted Brian." quick glances to thaw cellphone attention permitted entry into a private moment that graces the pair like morning light" / The occasional glances of passers by falling on the pair..... beautifully put. Wonderful poem.... I so enjoyed!
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July 4, 2022 at 6:48 AM
Hello Valsa, Thanks very much for your thoughtful response to my urban piece to two buddies pushing through life. I see the man + dog as emblems of perseverance in heat pounding streets. Thanks again. Brian
Radice Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 12:25 PM
I think this is superb Brian. 2x3 legs. The people oblivious to them just glancing up from their mobile phones heightens the feeling of life's struggles and alienation. Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 7:44 PM
Hello Gary. I appreciate your read + comment regarding my Stature poem. The urban landscape is indeed rich with imagery. Passerbys do give the pair a quick glance before skirting around them. But persevere the bonded buddies do. Be well. Brian
Woodrow Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 8:10 PM
love your opening stanzas with the dog and his old man both three-legged then the last two ending lines...great write as always :)
Woodrow Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 9:11 PM
haha! that explains why I drink so much coffee oh the title is awesome too... :))
Sambourne Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 8:22 PM
Thank you, Susan. Your thoughtful words give my reluctant pen a push just as a coffee eases the NA's of contest oblivion. Be well. Sincerely, Brian
Rhymer Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 10:35 AM
Enjoyed.
Sambourne Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Thank you, Vickey. I appreciate your note. Best wishes, Brian
Koplin Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 2:21 PM
Two three legged buds, what a pair. Good write.
Sambourne Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 5:35 PM
Hello Mark. You're quite right - two buddies who struggle on 3 legs. But they more than get by. The Scottie + his owner live nearby. They embody perseverance; a resilience on busy sidewalks. Thank you for your stop by + comment. Best wishes. Brian
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