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Stars luster brightly in the night's cosmos sky. The moon was veiled by an ashen sigh. Freed me as the sky grew dark. White conch, shaft, cool lark, zinc-gilt clouds, spark moonlight rounds, dusk pours through wide hark. Bright clouds fall upon night's bark. Fluorescent tumbles Moon's blood-red eye. Stars luster brightly in the night's cosmos sky.
Written: January 17, 2023 Writing Challenge - Andaree Form - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/5/2023 11:45:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:05:00 AM
Sotto, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, I like your image too, Constance
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Date: 1/18/2023 6:14:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, my imagination swoons in the fantasy of your poetic finesse. Such impressive and expressive cosmic creativity. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/18/2023 10:38:00 AM
Hello Sotto, i also wish you the best in the contest The stars are so bright in the dark sky. xx-Darlene.
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Date: 1/18/2023 8:40:00 AM
Creative and ornamental design in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/18/2023 6:02:00 AM
- Wow what a starry sky, you describe so beautifully here in your poem, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/18/2023 5:15:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive, colorful stellar poem my friend. Enjoyed the images you convey.
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Date: 1/18/2023 3:19:00 AM
A lovely poem augmented by a lovely picture. All the best in the contest, dear friend.
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Date: 1/18/2023 2:13:00 AM
Incredibly well-written poem for the contest. I'm sure it will rate high.
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