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STARS IN SPRING Frost-fire grasses chorus on snow-white weather weeping slowly, kisses of sunbeams. . . happy, star-struck dewdrops, tumble on cherry blossoms beauty in springtime! ______________________________________ ****Sponsor Craig Cornish Contest Name Sapphic Stanza Number Three 2nd place OLIVE ELOISA GUILLERMO 11:16 pm, March 13, 2015

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Date: 7/13/2015 12:50:00 AM
OLIVE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this coming week. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/19/2015 1:57:00 AM
thanks much Skat.. :D!
Date: 5/7/2015 4:50:00 PM
Very imaginative!! Congrats, the poem is as beautiful as the lovely picture above it.
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:13:00 AM
thanks much Andie.. :)! olive
Date: 5/6/2015 2:42:00 PM
Such pretty springtime imagery expressed in your lovely poem, Olive! Congrats :)
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:35:00 AM
thank you so much LAura.. :)!
Date: 5/6/2015 1:56:00 PM
A beauty Olive many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/6/2015 9:48:00 AM
Olive. Congrats on the win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 7/19/2015 1:57:00 AM
thanks much Skat.. :D!
Date: 5/6/2015 9:03:00 AM
Olive:) Congratulations on your awesome win. Love Linda
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Date: 7/19/2015 1:53:00 AM
thank you so much lovely Linda.. :D!
Date: 5/6/2015 7:59:00 AM
Anime, congrats to you. Beautifully penned in color.
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:09:00 AM
thank you so much.. :)!
Date: 3/18/2015 11:47:00 AM
You rock girl, great write!
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Date: 3/19/2015 6:55:00 AM
Thanks much Maurice.. :)! Im glad you are back. :)!
Date: 3/17/2015 12:44:00 PM
Your poem captures the charm of nature's Spring in its purity as part of this beautiful planet. Emile.
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thanks much Emile.. :)! Im so glad you like it as I am.. :)!I love spring!
Date: 3/17/2015 3:55:00 AM
Excellent. A lovely write about beautiful season. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:13:00 AM
thanks much Ravi .. I appreciate your visits.. :)!
Date: 3/16/2015 6:51:00 PM
Your poem contains stunning imagery and is very lovely Olive! 7
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Connie.. :) I am glad you like it.. I love spring and thoughts of it always inspires me to write about it.. :)!
Date: 3/16/2015 1:35:00 PM
Springtime, a most beautiful season with budding trees and the pretty Cherry Blossom. A delight to read Oliz, hugs//James xx
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Date: 3/17/2015 9:57:00 AM
Dno James, thank you for reading and liking my porm.. :);)warm hugs..
Date: 3/16/2015 10:48:00 AM
Wow I love that imagery! awesome and unique lines! :)
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Date: 3/17/2015 9:55:00 AM
thanks much Cassie for your awesome comment.. :)

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