Valsa George Poet Quatrain

Stars

 Sentries stationed at the height

Celestial wayfarers of the night

Dancing damsels with the light

Fading phantoms at Phoebes’ sight

 
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JC Brul January 31, 2022 at 5:41 AM What a cosmic sight. I am glad Poetry Soup is accessible now here without VPN. Happy to see you here dear poet friend.

Bill Baker January 29, 2022 at 3:30 PM Perfect rhyming, good entry for contest. Good luck, Valsa. Bill

Lisa Ricci January 29, 2022 at 10:50 AM Hello Valsa - I loved the imagery that is present and the soft gentle poetic voice and tone. This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing. May you enjoy poetrysoup.

Debra L Brown January 28, 2022 at 10:22 AM I loved the poem, Valsa. There is nothing more calming than gazing at the stars. Hugs ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues January 28, 2022 at 8:42 AM Lovely imagery last verse, Valsa! ~ hugs

Anil Deo January 27, 2022 at 6:56 PM Simply beautifully & TRUTHfully captured: I shall gaze at stars afresh. Blessings & shalom my Sister in Christ Anil Deo January 28, 2022 at 6:11 AM Imagine a sky with neither moon nor stars. Ahh God's mercies !! Amen Valsa George January 27, 2022 at 9:02 PM Start gazing at the stars from a new perspective ! :) :) Enjoyed your comment, dear brother!

Gershon Wolf January 27, 2022 at 5:50 PM Oooh! Smooth and creamy! Definitely Celestial Cerebations. :) gw Valsa George January 27, 2022 at 9:00 PM Thanks a lot Gershon ! :) :)

Rico Leffanta January 27, 2022 at 10:41 AM Awe, shoot! Valsa George January 27, 2022 at 8:57 PM Don't miss the target !.... Don't miss the target.... :) Thanks for your visit Rico

Victor Buhagiar January 27, 2022 at 9:46 AM I love all poems that deal with the stars. Beautifully written. Victor Valsa George January 27, 2022 at 8:55 PM In many of your poems there are references to the night glowing with stars ! Thanks a lot dear Victor !

Tom Cunningham January 27, 2022 at 8:49 AM Nothing more beautiful than the night sky on a clear moonless night. Tom Valsa George January 27, 2022 at 8:54 PM On a clear night the sky turns a sparkling jewel with all stars glimmering. Thanks a lot Tom

Heidi Sands January 27, 2022 at 8:35 AM This is beautifully written Valsa :) Valsa George January 27, 2022 at 8:52 PM Thanks a lot Heidi !

Sotto Poet January 27, 2022 at 6:03 AM Valsa, The vivid images you utilized were fantastic. My friend, your poetry is of exceptional quality. Best of luck in the contest. Valsa George January 27, 2022 at 8:52 PM Thank you dear poet friend ! Your sweet encouragement is reciprocated with much love !

Vijay Pandit January 27, 2022 at 5:19 AM Stellar quality to your poem my friend. Much enjoyed the dynamic imagery. Valsa George January 27, 2022 at 8:50 PM Feel thrilled ! Thank you for this great acknowledgement from a poet of stellar quality!