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Stars

Sentries stationed at the height Celestial wayfarers of the night Dancing damsels with the light Fading phantoms at Phoebes’ sight
Placed First A Strand's (1064) Poetry Contest Sponsor. Brian Strand

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Date: 1/31/2022 5:41:00 AM
What a cosmic sight. I am glad Poetry Soup is accessible now here without VPN. Happy to see you here dear poet friend.
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Date: 1/29/2022 3:30:00 PM
Perfect rhyming, good entry for contest. Good luck, Valsa. Bill
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Date: 1/29/2022 10:50:00 AM
Hello Valsa - I loved the imagery that is present and the soft gentle poetic voice and tone. This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing. May you enjoy poetrysoup.
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Date: 1/28/2022 10:22:00 AM
I loved the poem, Valsa. There is nothing more calming than gazing at the stars. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 1/28/2022 8:42:00 AM
Lovely imagery last verse, Valsa! ~ hugs
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Date: 1/27/2022 6:56:00 PM
Simply beautifully & TRUTHfully captured: I shall gaze at stars afresh. Blessings & shalom my Sister in Christ
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Anil Deo
Date: 1/28/2022 6:11:00 AM
Imagine a sky with neither moon nor stars. Ahh God's mercies !! Amen
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Valsa George
Date: 1/27/2022 9:02:00 PM
Start gazing at the stars from a new perspective ! :) :) Enjoyed your comment, dear brother!
Date: 1/27/2022 5:50:00 PM
Oooh! Smooth and creamy! Definitely Celestial Cerebations. :) gw
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Valsa George
Date: 1/27/2022 9:00:00 PM
Thanks a lot Gershon ! :) :)
Date: 1/27/2022 10:41:00 AM
Awe, shoot!
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Valsa George
Date: 1/27/2022 8:57:00 PM
Don't miss the target !.... Don't miss the target.... :) Thanks for your visit Rico
Date: 1/27/2022 9:46:00 AM
I love all poems that deal with the stars. Beautifully written. Victor
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Valsa George
Date: 1/27/2022 8:55:00 PM
In many of your poems there are references to the night glowing with stars ! Thanks a lot dear Victor !
Date: 1/27/2022 8:49:00 AM
Nothing more beautiful than the night sky on a clear moonless night. Tom
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Valsa George
Date: 1/27/2022 8:54:00 PM
On a clear night the sky turns a sparkling jewel with all stars glimmering. Thanks a lot Tom
Date: 1/27/2022 8:35:00 AM
This is beautifully written Valsa :)
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Valsa George
Date: 1/27/2022 8:52:00 PM
Thanks a lot Heidi !
Date: 1/27/2022 6:03:00 AM
Valsa, The vivid images you utilized were fantastic. My friend, your poetry is of exceptional quality. Best of luck in the contest.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/27/2022 8:52:00 PM
Thank you dear poet friend ! Your sweet encouragement is reciprocated with much love !
Date: 1/27/2022 5:19:00 AM
Stellar quality to your poem my friend. Much enjoyed the dynamic imagery.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/27/2022 8:50:00 PM
Feel thrilled ! Thank you for this great acknowledgement from a poet of stellar quality!

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