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Stars

 Sentries stationed at the height

Celestial wayfarers of the night

Dancing damsels with the light

Fading phantoms at Phoebes’ sight

 
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A Strand's (1064) Poetry Contest
Sponsor. Brian Strand

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2022

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JCB Brul Date: 1/31/2022 5:41:00 AM What a cosmic sight. I am glad Poetry Soup is accessible now here without VPN. Happy to see you here dear poet friend. Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 1/29/2022 3:30:00 PM Perfect rhyming, good entry for contest. Good luck, Valsa. Bill Login to Reply

Lisa Ricci Date: 1/29/2022 10:50:00 AM Hello Valsa - I loved the imagery that is present and the soft gentle poetic voice and tone. This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing. May you enjoy poetrysoup. Login to Reply

Debra L Brown Date: 1/28/2022 10:22:00 AM I loved the poem, Valsa. There is nothing more calming than gazing at the stars. Hugs ~ Debra Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/28/2022 8:42:00 AM Lovely imagery last verse, Valsa! ~ hugs Login to Reply

Anil Deo Date: 1/27/2022 6:56:00 PM Simply beautifully & TRUTHfully captured: I shall gaze at stars afresh. Blessings & shalom my Sister in Christ Login to Reply Anil Deo Date: 1/28/2022 6:11:00 AM Imagine a sky with neither moon nor stars. Ahh God's mercies !! Amen Valsa George Date: 1/27/2022 9:02:00 PM Start gazing at the stars from a new perspective ! :) :) Enjoyed your comment, dear brother!

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/27/2022 5:50:00 PM Oooh! Smooth and creamy! Definitely Celestial Cerebations. :) gw Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/27/2022 9:00:00 PM Thanks a lot Gershon ! :) :)

Rico Leffanta Date: 1/27/2022 10:41:00 AM Awe, shoot! Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/27/2022 8:57:00 PM Don't miss the target !.... Don't miss the target.... :) Thanks for your visit Rico

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/27/2022 9:46:00 AM I love all poems that deal with the stars. Beautifully written. Victor Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/27/2022 8:55:00 PM In many of your poems there are references to the night glowing with stars ! Thanks a lot dear Victor !

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/27/2022 8:49:00 AM Nothing more beautiful than the night sky on a clear moonless night. Tom Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/27/2022 8:54:00 PM On a clear night the sky turns a sparkling jewel with all stars glimmering. Thanks a lot Tom

Heidi Sands Date: 1/27/2022 8:35:00 AM This is beautifully written Valsa :) Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/27/2022 8:52:00 PM Thanks a lot Heidi !

Sotto Poet Date: 1/27/2022 6:03:00 AM Valsa, The vivid images you utilized were fantastic. My friend, your poetry is of exceptional quality. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/27/2022 8:52:00 PM Thank you dear poet friend ! Your sweet encouragement is reciprocated with much love !

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/27/2022 5:19:00 AM Stellar quality to your poem my friend. Much enjoyed the dynamic imagery. Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 1/27/2022 8:50:00 PM Feel thrilled ! Thank you for this great acknowledgement from a poet of stellar quality!