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Starry Love

The seductive air criss-crossed through my hair Not so cold , yet it sent shivers down my spine It made forget what I was there for Like I was drunk down a bottle of wine. A million stars shone dimly above me The dark night sky looked like a full tilt celebrity The more I gazed the more I fell in love The more I got drawn towards its sparkling beauty. I looked in the direction of the wind The moon tried to grab my attention shining over the mountains The light only blinded me, I closed my eyes For tonight the stars were my only companions. Not a cloud in the sky dared to step in between This place was where I belonged I had searched my entire life for this attraction For long this feeling I have longed. This sweet charade lifted my soul From the misery that laid below I wish I could make people feel what I feel How it turned me around when I felt low. It was more than just the view that got me The aura of the moment seemed so right The dim light of the stars guide me through As I try to immortalize the essence of the night. PRATIK NAYAK

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/21/2016 3:27:00 PM
nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2015 2:56:00 PM
HOPE TO SEE YOU RETURN 2016
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Date: 9/29/2015 8:30:00 PM
Hi Pratik, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/29/2015 1:52:00 PM
Pratik, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Pratik Nayak
Date: 9/29/2015 1:59:00 PM
Hi SKAT! Thanks for the warm welcome. You are too kind. It has been more than a couple of years since I have stopped writing poems. Probably because I lost confidence in my poetry. Looking for stone constructive criticism to start building again. *hugs*
Date: 9/29/2015 4:34:00 AM
- Hey Pratik :) - Welcome with your first great poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Pratik Nayak
Date: 9/29/2015 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! Nice to meet you. :)
Date: 9/28/2015 11:37:00 PM
A lovely piece, Pratik, and a fine first submission to the site. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy your stay with us, sharing and reading with us fellow wordsmiths. Have fun. Regards, Viv
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Pratik Nayak
Date: 9/28/2015 11:53:00 PM
Thanks, Viv! Much appreciated.

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