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''starry Dream''

The sky is dark blue this dreamy night,
            and in the vast canopy only one star is winking;
it beckons to my soul so I reach out with my finger,
      and magically stars are sprinkling and sinking.

Like a waterfall of lights they swirl, twirl and dance,
            I am taken up in a whirlwind of bliss and delight;
then I find myself in a lush enchanted forest,
      then, on a beautiful unicorn horse I fly the night.

And I ride this ethereal creature all the night long,
            over streams flowing and forests and valleys green;
to stunning hidden places and wondrous cities,
      but sadly, it is dawn and I must leave this scene.

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May 27, 2018 (Edit from
December 17, 2015)



For the contest, Theme #1 Stars, sponsor, Skat

Ninth Place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/22/2015 4:02:00 PM broken, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/22/2015 4:50:00 PM Linda, thank you so much ~

Robert Lindley Date: 12/22/2015 11:17:00 AM My good friend, your verses are always awesome and inspiring. This piece continues your dedication to excellence in poetry! Congrats on your win and this fine poem was a true pleasure to read this great morn! Adding this gem to my fav list.. Thanks. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/22/2015 5:18:00 PM Robert, oh thanks for that nice comment, I love awesome and inspiring, and thanks for the congrats and the fav !!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/22/2015 1:38:00 AM Lovely write n win Constance.. big congrats! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/22/2015 2:08:00 AM Upma, thanks for the lovely and the congrats ~

Skat A Date: 12/21/2015 11:53:00 PM broken, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/22/2015 2:08:00 AM Skat, thank you so much for my placement in your contest, I am honored ~

Eve Roper Date: 12/21/2015 11:28:00 PM Broken Wing, I love unicorns a sign of purity and love. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Merry Christmas to you and all your loved ones. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/22/2015 2:09:00 AM Eve thanks for the wonderful and the congratulations and seasons greetings to you also ~

Eric Boddie Date: 12/19/2015 5:42:00 PM what you have done....is impressed my mother's son....but you do that all the time....you are one of the reasons for my rhyme....;) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/19/2015 11:38:00 PM Eric, thanks for visiting my poetry and the comment is appreciated ~

Eileen Manassian Date: 12/19/2015 8:51:00 AM Oh my....what a celestial write this is, my dear. So beautiful....Honestly....every stanza was a dream...To un-dream a dream is very sad....but what fantastic wording. Hugs Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/19/2015 9:07:00 AM Eileen, thanks for visiting my poem, and for the lovely comment, the un-dream line just came to me, it seemed a good way to end the beauty ~

Duke Beaufort Date: 12/19/2015 8:22:00 AM Well, you may un-dream it if that must be so, but we will remember it always. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 12/19/2015 9:07:00 AM Duke, thanks for that lovely comment, appreciate ~