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The sky is dark blue this dreamy night, and in the vast canopy only one star is winking; it beckons to my soul so I reach out with my finger, and magically stars are sprinkling and sinking. Like a waterfall of lights they swirl, twirl and dance, I am taken up in a whirlwind of bliss and delight; then I find myself in a lush enchanted forest, then, on a beautiful unicorn horse I fly the night. And I ride this ethereal creature all the night long, over streams flowing and forests and valleys green; to stunning hidden places and wondrous cities, but sadly, it is dawn and I must leave this scene. _________________________ May 27, 2018 (Edit from December 17, 2015) For the contest, Theme #1 Stars, sponsor, Skat Ninth Place

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Date: 12/22/2015 4:02:00 PM
broken, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 4:50:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much ~
Date: 12/22/2015 11:17:00 AM
My good friend, your verses are always awesome and inspiring. This piece continues your dedication to excellence in poetry! Congrats on your win and this fine poem was a true pleasure to read this great morn! Adding this gem to my fav list.. Thanks.
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Date: 12/22/2015 5:18:00 PM
Robert, oh thanks for that nice comment, I love awesome and inspiring, and thanks for the congrats and the fav !!
Date: 12/22/2015 1:38:00 AM
Lovely write n win Constance.. big congrats!
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Date: 12/22/2015 2:08:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the lovely and the congrats ~
Date: 12/21/2015 11:53:00 PM
broken, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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Date: 12/22/2015 2:08:00 AM
Skat, thank you so much for my placement in your contest, I am honored ~
Date: 12/21/2015 11:28:00 PM
Broken Wing, I love unicorns a sign of purity and love. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Merry Christmas to you and all your loved ones.
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Date: 12/22/2015 2:09:00 AM
Eve thanks for the wonderful and the congratulations and seasons greetings to you also ~
Date: 12/19/2015 5:42:00 PM
what you have done....is impressed my mother's son....but you do that all the time....you are one of the reasons for my rhyme....;)
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Date: 12/19/2015 11:38:00 PM
Eric, thanks for visiting my poetry and the comment is appreciated ~
Date: 12/19/2015 8:51:00 AM
Oh my....what a celestial write this is, my dear. So beautiful....Honestly....every stanza was a dream...To un-dream a dream is very sad....but what fantastic wording. Hugs
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Date: 12/19/2015 9:07:00 AM
Eileen, thanks for visiting my poem, and for the lovely comment, the un-dream line just came to me, it seemed a good way to end the beauty ~
Date: 12/19/2015 8:22:00 AM
Well, you may un-dream it if that must be so, but we will remember it always.
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Date: 12/19/2015 9:07:00 AM
Duke, thanks for that lovely comment, appreciate ~

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