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Stardust I'M Seeing

Trees breezily sway to a tropical tune we hear playing. You grin as you twirl me with what seems like wizardry! Under the big golden moon, I look to the sky. But where are the stars on this night so enchanting? Are they hiding? Then I look into your eyes, and . . . stardust I’m seeing. June 16, 2020 for the 'UN-RHY-ME' Poetry Contest of Brian Strand Now for John Hamilton's 'Your best free verse 2020' Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/2/2020 8:15:00 PM
Andrea, your enchanted pen twirled a beautiful romantic moment. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/2/2020 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" I love your line, "to a tropical tune we hear playing." I could use that right about now. Can we run away????? Enjoy your win and day............
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Date: 12/1/2020 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations for the win with this romantic twirl. Very enchanting, my friend ~ John
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Date: 12/1/2020 4:19:00 AM
This is a brilliant poem. I love it. God bless you sweet lady :)
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Date: 6/22/2020 2:06:00 AM
The stardust you see is definitely an enchanting melody for me. Congratulations on your win Andrea :)
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Date: 6/20/2020 7:27:00 AM
Romantic one. Well done mam:-) Congratulations for your win. Keep writing.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
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Date: 6/19/2020 11:37:00 PM
Andrea, I think we are starting to think too much alike. This is lovely. Mine was about a romantic moment as well.
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Date: 6/19/2020 10:09:00 PM
I am very happy that Nette gave you second place for this wonderful entry Andrea. Congratulations my friend and you’re deserving win! xxoo
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Date: 6/19/2020 9:35:00 PM
Very nice Andrea, surprised you didn't enter my best ever contest! This is a beauty!
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/20/2020 8:47:00 PM
Don't feel bad about entering it over and over, Greg keeps entering his best I think 5 times now and keeps winning and that was only written I think 2 years ago!
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/20/2020 1:58:00 PM
Well I said in the contest criteria pick your best poem you think I would like, not necessarily your most popular or the one with the most views. Personally I'm not sure your Cinder girl is your best it was written a long time ago, but I'm sure it would have made it in the top ten.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/20/2020 1:31:00 PM
John, I never even knew you HAD the best ever contest. I must have blinked and it was filled up before I even knew about it!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/20/2020 1:31:00 PM
How would you have scored Cinder Girl? Just curious!!
Date: 6/18/2020 3:54:00 PM
I am certain Nette will place this beauty high on her list Andrea. It is gorgeous! xxoo
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Date: 6/17/2020 8:27:00 AM
Now that's amore!
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Date: 6/17/2020 7:29:00 AM
I like how you weaved the two into romance...
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Date: 6/16/2020 11:41:00 PM
very sweet and whimsical Andrea :)
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Date: 6/16/2020 2:31:00 PM
You always add a romantic touch Andrea, Wonderful write...soupmail
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Date: 6/16/2020 7:34:00 AM
How lovely and romantic! You captured the essence of the theme, Andrea.
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Date: 6/16/2020 5:41:00 AM
lovely write Andrea.. Sweet and romantic.. Good luck..
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Date: 6/16/2020 3:08:00 AM
Very romantic take on the contest theme, love the image Andrea Good luck Tom
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