Andrea Dietrich Poet Free verse

Stardust I'M Seeing

Trees breezily sway 
to a tropical tune we hear playing.
You grin as you twirl me 
with what seems like wizardry!
Under the big golden moon, 
I look to the sky.
But where are the stars 
on this night so enchanting?
Are they hiding?
 Then I look into your eyes,
and . . . stardust I’m seeing.

June 16, 2020
for  the 'UN-RHY-ME' Poetry Contest of Brian Strand
Now for John Hamilton's 'Your best free verse 2020' Poetry Contest

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Susan Ashley December 2, 2020 at 8:15 PM Andrea, your enchanted pen twirled a beautiful romantic moment. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith December 2, 2020 at 8:55 AM Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" I love your line, "to a tropical tune we hear playing." I could use that right about now. Can we run away????? Enjoy your win and day............

John Watt December 1, 2020 at 11:46 AM Congratulations for the win with this romantic twirl. Very enchanting, my friend ~ John

Regina Mcintosh December 1, 2020 at 4:19 AM This is a brilliant poem. I love it. God bless you sweet lady :)

Aditi Mishra June 22, 2020 at 2:06 AM The stardust you see is definitely an enchanting melody for me. Congratulations on your win Andrea :)

V. Deepa June 20, 2020 at 7:27 AM Romantic one. Well done mam:-) Congratulations for your win. Keep writing.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

James Inman June 19, 2020 at 11:37 PM Andrea, I think we are starting to think too much alike. This is lovely. Mine was about a romantic moment as well.

Connie Marcum Wong June 19, 2020 at 10:09 PM I am very happy that Nette gave you second place for this wonderful entry Andrea. Congratulations my friend and you’re deserving win! xxoo

John Hamilton June 19, 2020 at 9:35 PM Very nice Andrea, surprised you didn't enter my best ever contest! This is a beauty! John Hamilton June 20, 2020 at 8:47 PM Don't feel bad about entering it over and over, Greg keeps entering his best I think 5 times now and keeps winning and that was only written I think 2 years ago! John Hamilton June 20, 2020 at 1:58 PM Well I said in the contest criteria pick your best poem you think I would like, not necessarily your most popular or the one with the most views. Personally I'm not sure your Cinder girl is your best it was written a long time ago, but I'm sure it would have made it in the top ten. Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2020 at 1:31 PM John, I never even knew you HAD the best ever contest. I must have blinked and it was filled up before I even knew about it!! Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2020 at 1:31 PM How would you have scored Cinder Girl? Just curious!!

Connie Marcum Wong June 18, 2020 at 3:54 PM I am certain Nette will place this beauty high on her list Andrea. It is gorgeous! xxoo

Kenneth Cheney June 17, 2020 at 8:27 AM Now that's amore!

Arturo Michael June 17, 2020 at 7:29 AM I like how you weaved the two into romance...

David Mohn June 16, 2020 at 11:41 PM very sweet and whimsical Andrea :)

Joseph May June 16, 2020 at 2:31 PM You always add a romantic touch Andrea, Wonderful write...soupmail

Vijay Pandit June 16, 2020 at 7:34 AM How lovely and romantic! You captured the essence of the theme, Andrea.

Jenish Somadas June 16, 2020 at 5:41 AM lovely write Andrea.. Sweet and romantic.. Good luck..

Tom Cunningham June 16, 2020 at 3:08 AM Very romantic take on the contest theme, love the image Andrea Good luck Tom